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07-10-2009, 04:38 AM | Post: #1
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Hi guys, sadly my old thread was bugged and the replies wouldn't show for 2-3 days, which nobody could really put up with. So I've decided to make a new thread, being more cool looking with more features and easier contexts.

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Name: SoltusSniper (Solttusnip3r in real game)
Faction: Royals
Class: Commando
Appearance: Red beret/airborne jacket/camouflage pants/eddy the trusty eagle
Personality: A good pilot/acts like a sneaky predator/yells RAWR all the time and flexes his muscles/friendly/is a veteran from the "Track cycling"/remembers the horrible day when the war started like it was yesterday/has nothing against the nationals/sometimes acts friendly with nationals and waves.
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Appearance:Soldier's helmet on his head, the medals on his chest, naked chest, (yes i put my medals on my chest, something wrong?) other is default
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07-10-2009, 04:43 AM | Post: #2
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Time to start to post all the Chapters done so far. Lets begin Sleepy

Chapter One: Missing in Action


The Game has changed, all of a sudden people started dying and not re spawning, people would die and stay that way, everything that happened was made permanent. I wasn't sure whether it was a glitch, or something new, but days passed and nobody could leave, the servers begun merging as did the maps. As for the soldiers, they came from all different servers, all merged together into this....world. I wasn't sure what was going wrong, but I couldn't just stand and let the Nationals be slaughtered, I had to do something. We had to stand together, because now this is more than a game, this is a war!

All around me I could already notice the toll that this war was having on the Nationals. The night darkened, above me I could spot the thousands of stars which seemed to represent the souls we've already lost. Pulling my coat over me, I tried to enjoy the rest but nothing would calm my nerves, nothing would take my mind off today's losses. This isn't a game, I could tell from the way I could glare into the eyes of the men I kill, and see their life draining away, this wasn't right. Somebody had changed this, it was more than a game now, this is a war.

I turned, Dyabolik and several other men approached me, their faces held a grim look, I could tell something was afoot. "Whats happened?" I stared Dyabolik in the eye, he looked at me and uttered the most spine chilling words, "Cheesewoo and ElectroNoob, their plane went down today. We've not received any word were, but a small platoon of soldiers in the Village spotted a plane crashing in the nearby hills, it's the best we can tell you...for now at least". I nodded, then stood up. Trying to hold back any emotions that were trying to break through, I picked up my Rifle, a Sharpshooter. I pulled on my trench coat and tied by bandanna around my face, then finally pulled my black sombrero over my head. "Men, I'm going to find out what happened to Cheese and Electro. Keep this area secure, kill any Royals on sight as usual. As for you Dyabolik, try keep a scout for any other surviving Nationals, so many seem to end up in the Buccaneer Bay, and we can't risk any more losses"

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07-10-2009, 04:45 AM | Post: #3
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Chapter Two: The Inconvenience of War

I threw on my stealth and took one more look at the small group of men I was posted with, I gave them a final salute and strode out of the walled area. The nights air set fire to my senses, I used to love it, sitting somewhere and embracing the night, but this was no time for reminiscing. Seconds past and I reached the stone bridge that gaped the chasm that divided the Nationals with the Royals. I crossed it quickly, and arrived at the small outcrop of rocks I would use as my vantage point against the Royals, I scrambled up onto the outcrop on the right of a small gap between the two, just to get a better view.

What I saw destroyed my hope, what I saw crushed my very soul. The Royals had massed an army that we could not stand against, eight tanks could be spotted at the farm. Over fifty Gunners sat posted around the ship and all entrances to the Royal Base in the Bay. "This is impossible, I can't go through this" the darkness of the night was then illuminated as a giant mass of Soldiers made their way out of the Village all carrying lanterns. This could spell the end for us Nationals, I had to rescue Cheesewoo and ElectroNoob, but if I ignored this army and didn't report it the Nationals would be attacked unprepared and unready for what lies ahead. Are last hope was a plane, It was on the Runway at are final base, located at the far opposite side to the Farm where the Royals had massed in hundreds. If the Nationals base in the Bay was attacked, I'm not sure what would happen, I'm only aware that our main base is situated on the Coast and that the Royals are heavily situated in the Village. This was now a complete and total war, this was it. There was no more small assaults, this is finally what we've worried about, this is finally a battlefield. I needed to tell the others, we could take them to the plane, hopefully another has spawned in my absence, but we had to evacuate the Bay, it was are only hope of survival.

I ran, down the outcrop of rocks and back to the secondary base, puffing and trying to explain.
"Dyabolik, it's the Royals. They've got a massive army prepared to attack, we must evacuate the Bay immediately. Get your men to the other base, there is hopefully two planes there. Load them up, get as many as you can onto each plane and fly north of here, you should pass over the Village sooner or later so I want your word you'll do your best to find Cheese and Electro".

"NoobsFTW, if this is true. We must evacuate now, and yes I will give my word to you that we will try and locate ElectroNoob and Cheesewoo" Dyabolik was serious, he would evacuate are men "But what are you doing, your coming with us right?".

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07-10-2009, 04:47 AM | Post: #4
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"You will be flying over a large Royal force, I have to make sure you are going to be safe and not get shot down. It's a sacrifice I'm willing to make, it's for the Nationals" I saluted Dyabolik and his men "One day, you will be faced with a force you cannot imagine. But it is not this day, today you will save what remains of this National force and join the Coast's Nationals". Without looking back I ran once more, I've done all that I could to prevent the Royals killing them all. I arrived once again at my outcrop which I scrambled up to the top and set up a vantage point, waiting for the roaring engines of the National Planes to fly by to safety. As I lay on my stomach waiting, it begun to rain, the cold wet droplets soaked my in moments, causing my clothes to cling to my body and chill me to the bone. I looked up ahead and I saw the National planes, two of them come flying over the Shipwreck. I peered through my scope and looked for anybody attempted to shoot them down, and as expected they did.

I stood up and unleashed hell, killing five Royals with my first clip before reloading and killing another five. I continued for what seemed like hours, but really it was only around five minutes but I had killed around 20 Royals, and as I stood up for my final round I was struck in the shoulder, I'm guessing by a Sniper. I collapsed and let the cold embrace my body, I started to feel sleepy and darkness crept through my body, is was dying. I could feel blood dripping down my body, and I knew it now was a matter of seconds before I would be swarmed by Royals, so I mustered my strength and got to my feet. Before I could be shot again I threw stealth on and jumped, making a run for it to the jeeps outside the towns back entrance. Royals begun to scramble up the Rock and I watched as they came to realize I wasn't there anymore, smiling slightly I start the engine and drive the jeep through the darkness. I'd stopped the Royals killing the Nationals of the Bay, now I had to find Cheesewoo and Electronoob, they were my priority from now on in.

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07-10-2009, 04:48 AM | Post: #5
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Chapter Three: Dreams? or visions!

The nights air wasn't something I was fond of anymore, it was only a burden. The stars shone upon me, my body felt weak but my spirit strong. Everywhere I looked I was once again brought to the faces of the men I killed, just like me, defending their people. Propped up against my jeep, I tried to sleep but every time my eyes closed shut the faces would flood in, their eyes watering, the last gasp of air leaving their body. Nothing was and will ever be the same, this war has scarred these men so deeply the wound cannot be repaired. Even through the layers of clothing the cold bore deep into my body, even through the protection of skin I could feel myself being lifted from my body, my eyes closing...

I awoke in a strange place, I felt strange, like I wasn't anchored to this world anymore. I could see Cheesewoo, ElectroNoob and my other Comrades, IvoryBlade, TerrenVa, Bubblebut and Dyabolik. They stood alone, they did not see me. The wind and rain poured down and blew them around, but in front of them marched a giant flood of Royals, my Comrades stood proud, nothing but courage flowed from their bodies, I could sense it. The wave of Royals neared, and they yelled, Cheesewoo and Terren lead the War cry with a scream of anger, then Cheese stepped forward and uttered words that chilled me, that made me shiver. "My friends, today we are faced with odds nobody would even risk their chances. But we are not anybody, we are the Nationals, and men remember this...Without fear, we can have no courage and without courage we wouldn't be here" and with that they charged, into the glorious army of Royals, they charged...

My body returned, the cold air bit at the arms and legs. The moonlight flooded my vision and I awoke, still propped against my jeep. I picked myself up and hopped into the jeep. Tonight I would rescue my friends, tomorrow I will unite the Nationals and then we will fight. But that dream, it felt so real, could it be the future of the Nationals, could we prevent it? As I drove down the beaten path, I could notice something coming into view, a lighthouse maybe? Was I nearing the Seaside?

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07-10-2009, 04:49 AM | Post: #6
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Chapter Four: The Seaside Skirmish - Part One

Ah, the seaside. I made my way to a small collection of houses on the outskirts and parked my jeep. I then quickly made my way towards the front of the collection, throwing on my stealth to keep safe.

I peered through my rifles scope, getting a vantage on the village that was directly opposite my position. I could see two Royals sitting on a piled heap of Sandbags, smoking and laughing heartily. I didn't like this, I couldn't stand watching Royals enjoy themselves while the Nationals struggle, surviving against all the odds, I would of killed them, but as I placed my finger on the trigger, a third Royal came walking through the walls gap with a Commando tied up by the hands. It was IvoryBlade, a National Sniper I'd made good friends with throughout fighting, and he must have been captured. The three Royals formed a circle around Ivory and started taunting him, this pushed the line for me, I couldn't let this happen. I pulled the trigger and my stealth flushed off me, a loud crack broke out and one of the three Royals dropped, I pulled the trigger twice more, killing the surprised Royals. I then gestured to Ivory to run over to me, before more Royals come, and he used Elixir to dash across the field. Just as more Royals came to the sound, I dashed behind a collection of boxes and waited for Ivory to make arrive. He came over to me, panting but safe behind his stealth, I grinned and gestured that we move into the small courtyard where we can avoid the Royals.

Inside the courtyard we could relax slightly more than out in the open, after a minute I re-applied my stealth and could relax to the full extent of what was possible in this time of war. "Ivory, whats the status of the Seaside?" I knew it wasn't the best conversation starter, but I really had a need to know whats happened in places other than the bay. "Hm, I was separated from my squadron about a day ago, I was then captured by some Royals, only a few hours ago. But on my last check, we've got a substantial force pinned down at the Hillside farm and then a small force backing the farm at the small village behind it" This was quite pleasing, at least in the Seaside the Nationals are having less trouble here than in the bay "Well, the bay has became Royal territory now, the last of the Nationals evacuated in planes, I drove and ended up here'' Ivory shot me a confused look. "You mean you drove from the bay, to the Seaside, instead of flying?" Ivory was obviously confused "It's a choice I made, for two reasons, one because the Nationals needed a distraction, and two because I needed to go to the Village to find Cheesewoo and ElectroNoob".

Just as I expected Ivory to ask what had happened, we were interrupted by Royal voices nearby. It was obvious they would come and check here, to find their comrades killer. I quietly walked from my sitting spot and crept around to the edge of the wall to see what we are up against, to my luck it was only four Royals, but they were approaching quite fast. I ran back to Ivory "Okay, take two each. Your knife should do the trick, just wait till' they come into the courtyard then we both unleash hell, easy eh?" Ivory nodded, and he scrambled to his feet. We both got into position and waiting silently, until the first two Royals popped around the corner, we both dashed at them, ready to fight....

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07-10-2009, 04:51 AM | Post: #7
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Chapter Four: The Seaside Skirmish - Part Two

My Knife ached for blood, Royal Blood and it's thirst was to be quenched. As the two Royals saw us come into view, the attempted to shoot but it was too late. Before a single bullet left their guns, Ivory and myself had stabbed them, killing them both instantly. Adrenalin begun to take over, my body felt fiery and I felt capable of anything. "Ivory, two more Royals are approaching, grab a shotgun from one of the two dead soldiers and we'll blast are way through them" I bent down and grasped the cold wooden handle of a Royal Shotgun, it felt good to hold a weapon that I wasn't trained to use, strangely enough. Ivory did the same, and together we crouched behind a pile of boxes, waiting for the next two to foolishly walk to their death. They ran around the corner, and Ivory lent to the right and fired four shots, I followed with a brutal yell and fired wildly at the two Royals. They returned fire, but we seemed to catch them by surprise, and after only a few seconds they too dropped dead, filled with lead bullets.

"If that doesn't draw attention I don't know what will, take the shotguns and get in the jeep. We've gotta find somewhere safe" it was stress now, more Royals would be arriving any second and in minutes we'd be under fire. Ivory followed me to the jeep and I took the drivers seat, and with a loud rumble the motor kicked into action and we were off. "NoobsFTW, we need to get to Hillside Farm, to get to the remaining National force in the Seaside" Ivory was right, making it to the Hillside farm would be our best bet, it's safer if we have Nationals to provide defense from our Royal pursuers. "Okay, I can do that".

We drove straight past the farm, catching the Royals attention as we past. Bullets tore up the ground just behind us, which was indicating we are out of range. From there we took an off road drive to the small path coming from the Village, but as we made it to the Village we were hit by a rocket. The jeep tipped to one side, I was cut on the side of the face by flying pieces of metal, but I couldn't pay attention to that though, I needed to see if Ivory was okay. The jeep caught fire with Ivory unconscious inside, this wasn't good, I couldn't fend off an army of Royals with an unconscious Commando, but I could try. Ivory wasn't trapped luckily, I could get him free quite easily, but his body was limp and there was no way he could struggle. Then I went for a shotgun, picking it up from the backseat and slinging Ivory onto my back, I made a dash for any sort of cover. Behind me was the Gunner that had shot are jeep, he didn't shoot though, instead he stood there yelling for reinforcements, stupid really. With my heart almost bursting out my chest, I darted through the door of a house, putting Ivory down and quickly making a barrier to hold the door out of a cabinet and two wooden chairs that occupied the house. I sighed, it wasn't the easiest of things, but I made it, I was safe for now and could give IvoryBlade some needed rest.

Five minutes past and nothing happened, I could hear voices outside but nobody had noticed I was in here, hopefully. As I sat, back against the door all the faces of my friends flooded back to me, all the people close to me that I have lost, that I will loose as this war continues to rage on. Though I fight the Royals with a lust for blood, I cannot help bring myself to the fact they are in the same position as I, fighting for what they believe is right, to them we are the evil ones. My life wasn't much, but fighting for the Nationals has given me a purpose, I've made countless friends that I will not bare to loose, are lives are too precious. I turned to Ivory, he was coming around, but not completely, I had to give him more time, time that I would have to spend sitting backed against a wall, the only defense between me and an army of Royals.

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07-10-2009, 04:52 AM | Post: #8
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I wonder what Cheesewoo and Electronoob are doing, maybe their pinned down in a house like this, I'll save them though, I'll unite the Nationals and win this war, I promise myself I will. As I hung my head something started to bang on the door, then voices started yelling, the Royals have found us. "Open this door up fool" I heard one Royal growl "But sir, somethings backed against the door, I can't get it open" the second voice sounded softer, it was the voice of an innocent man, just another soldier caught in this war. My time was now, I had to protect Ivory. The banging on the door got more fierce, I had to get to my feet to hold the barricade. "Ivory, get up stairs, I'll hold them off, you should try escape through a window" I knew in his weak position he couldn't fight, so I would buy him some time, I'm not letting another friend die. As I watched him, he got to his feet and pulled his Rifle from his back and get in a stance ready for combat "Today, we fight together. Whatever happens, it's been an honor knowing you NoobsFTW, and now we fight..United we Shall stand"....

The banging stopped for a second, but then the a violent blast cracked the door open, and I could see twenty or more Royals standing outside ready. I ducked down behind the cabinet, bullets smashed against the wall behind Ivory. I then stood up, firing the shotgun into the crowd, hitting several Royals, before grabbing one by the collar and pulling his gun from his hands. Ducking down once more I threw the SMG to Ivory, it would be more effective than a Sharpshooters rifle. "This is for the Bay" I screamed as I unleashed hell on the Royal crowd with my shotgun, not bothering to duck but shooting rapidly at the crowd before reloading "and this..this is for my friends" I stuck the shotgun to a Royals chest and squeezed the trigger hard, releasing the deadly iron bullets into his body, killing yet another Royal. As I continued my rampage, I was hit by several bullets, my body beginning to feel cold, that strange icy feeling crept through my skin as I fought on, taking more Royals down. My legs felt weak, I couldn't support myself anymore and I needed to collapse before I injure myself further. I returned to my position behind the cabinet where I fired blindly at the crowd, but as the cold gripped my very life, I felt dizzy, something inside of me though made me keep going, stopped me from closing my eyes.

"Nationals do not die like this, we must push forward" Ivory grabbed my hand and pulled me over the cabinet and out into the open. I looked down the path towards the lighthouse and more Royals opened fire but Ivory pulled me to the side of the house and we both headed up a dirt path, I lost my feet halfway through the track though, collapsing. But Ivory wouldn't let go, he picked me up and focused his mind and activated his Elixir, giving him the speed to run, but as I watched the blue light form around him, my eyes closed, the pain had got to much.

I blinked, I awoke in a dimly lit room, I was on the floor still but I felt much better. I looked up, a National wearing a Tank Commanders hat took a long draw on his cigar and puffed smoke into the air. "Murpoz?" I asked, I thought I knew him from somewhere. He grinned "Yeah, who else could it be?"

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07-10-2009, 04:53 AM | Post: #9
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Chapter Five: Into the thick of it

My body ached against the cold floor, but I wasn't dying anymore so I was pleased. I looked up once more, and Murpoz walked over to me and outstretched his hand. I grasped it and he pulled me up, before calling two National Soldiers to come support me in case I fell. Looking around the room I saw pictures and maps across the walls, and spread out on the desk Murpoz was sitting at previously. "NoobsFTW, this is more serious than I or anybody else could imagine. The Royals are going to bleed us out if it's the last thing they do. They want us dead, they are desperate for victory" within his tone I could spot severe seriousness in his voice. I knew what he was going to ask me, it was something he wanted me to do, it was obvious "You require my assistance don't you Murpoz?" He looked at me, deep into the eye before replying "Yes. It's serious. IvoryBlade lost a team of four, they are being held prisoner in the village near the lighthouse. I need you to get them out alive, I'm not risking these lives, I swore I wouldn't let anymore die under my command". I needed to rescue my friends, but these soldiers trapped are also my friends, if they are National they are my brothers "Murpoz, I'm leaving now. I will bring them back safely, but I'll need a team" I picked up my shotgun from the floor, along with my rifle and slung the rifle onto my back and made a beeline for the door. "NoobsFTW, Ivory and Darkest are waiting outside. Good luck, I'm counting on you. These men see you as a hero now" I turned and saluted before opening the door and embracing the night. Outside stood Ivory and the Commando Darkest, who until now I hadn't met. "Men, we make our voice heard, lets show these Royals" I started to run down the path next to the runway, throwing on stealth to keep safe, as did Darkest and IvoryBlade. The night air chilled me down, and I still ached from the bullets, but Murpoz had the strangest feeling I'd be okay.

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07-10-2009, 04:55 AM | Post: #10
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In five minutes of silent running, we arrived at the end of the village, the other side of the lighthouse. We looked down the long road that divided two lanes of houses, any of which could contain a large number of Royals ready to kill us on sight. "Darkest, you scared?" I looked at the Commando, who seemed to shake at the thought of death "It's not fear. But the thought of all these men dying for their cause, I cannot bare the thought" his words touched me, I hadn't heard something like that for quite some time. "You are a brave Commando, I would give my life for you. But today, we shall rescue these Nationals. Forward Soldiers" and with that we all ran, past the houses until we came to a small alcove, covered with sandbags defending the lighthouse flag. No Royals had came until now, but as I turned the sound of an enemy Commandos stealth flushing popped in my ear and I turned around and shot randomly with my shotgun. The bullet collided with something, pushing it to the wall. I walked closer and it was a Royal Commando, his stealth flushed off, lying there in agony. I knelt down to look at him and I looked into his watering eyes...It couldn't be. "LilRepper" I asked him quietly "NoobsFTW, is that you?" my eyes begun to water, I'd shot my friend from the Royal army in my defense, and now he was dying. "My friend I am sorry" I lifted him up, and placed him in an upright position against the sandbags. "Ivory, Darkest, I need a bandage, QUICK" Darkest pulled one from out of his hip sack and tossed it to me, which I applied to Repper's wound softly, hoping it would help him. "Thank you. I'll be okay" he nodded, "hopefully".

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07-10-2009, 04:56 AM | Post: #11
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I turned back to Repper and he pointed to the house next to him, "In there, you'll find the prisoners. They are unguarded" I smiled before running to kick down the door. It smashed open revealing four injured Nationals. "Darkest, Ivory. Untie them, I'll keep a look out" They rushed to the prisoners as
I peered out the door and out down the street, ten Royal Soldiers came marching up. I clutched my shotgun tight, and walked back into the house "Stealth on Ivory and Darkest. I need you to get these Nationals outa here asap. We have a large amount of Soldiers coming up the road, hopefully they'll tend to my old friend Repper, but you have to escape out of the back. I'll make a distraction" my heart pounded against my chest, once again I was offering my life in return for the Nationals safety. "Noobs, you'll be outnumbered" Darkest was showing a great deal of concern, but I couldn't let him get injured, he needed to tend to the Nationals, who now where on their feat, ready to leave. "Nationals, once again I salute you. I will buy you some time, don't worry or look back. I promise I'll be okay, but from now on in I'm going for my friends, ElectroNoob and Cheesewoo. Don't expect me back anytime soon, but I will return. It's been an honor serving with you all" and with a salute I threw on my stealth once more and charged out the door. All the Soldiers stood around Repper who was attempting to make a cover story, pointing in another direction, but they were not stupid, they noticed the door open. "Somebodies taking the prisoners, search the perimeter" yelled a Royal, who looked at Repper angrily as the rest ran into the house, luckily Darkest and Ivory had escaped through the backdoor and were heading down the hill with the prisoners. "As for you, traitor. I suggest you stay still, I'm not going to let you live after you helped these Nationals" the Royal lifted a pistol, and I ran to him and placed my shotgun onto his head and whispering in his ear "Goodbye" I pulled the trigger, killing the Royal instantly. The shot broke out and more Royals could be heard approaching and I had no stealth at the moment. I could hear the Royals who started to chase Ivory and Darkest turning back, this wasn't good. "NoobsFTW, I want to come with you. Cheesewoo and ElectroNoob are my friend also, please?" I couldn't refuse him, so I lifted him over my shoulder, still carrying my shotgun I ran, running for my life with a Royal on my back.

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07-10-2009, 04:57 AM | Post: #12
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We made it to the bridge, where I was spotted by some Royals, who started to pursue us. "Repper, this is it. I'm going to put you down by a tree then fend them off, I'll come back for you" I placed him by a tree near the bridge and dropped my shotgun and took my rifle of my back, looking through the scope I knelt down and shot at the incoming Royals. Each bullet dropped another Royal, till I emptied my clip and had no time to reload. I looked around, ten Royals approached now from the south, this would be impossible, but I had to do something. Repper got up, struggling with the pain, but he stood up and took his rifle from his back. "What are you doing" Repper grinned "Buying you some time, go!" I couldn't leave him injured, but I had to escape. "Friends stick together, I will not leave you" I reloaded my rifle and knelt next to Repper. Through my scope I peered, my anger surged through my veins and I activated my piercing shot, firing the first five bullets, I killed another five. "Repper, their down, we've gotta escape. We'll both stealth and run to the collection of houses behind the farm, I have a jeep there" Repper nodded, he threw on stealth as I did and ran for his life, past the bullets, through the battlefield we ran. The nights air tearing at are faces, this was the surge of energy that made nothing impossible.

"Oh, we made it" I fell onto the floor panting and puffing, as did Repper. "W-we better get the jeep" I stood up, and walked around to where I parked the jeep. I stood in amazement, a Spitfire Plane. "Repper, I've got us a plane, quick. Get in" I yelled as I hoped into the drivers seat, watching Repper leap onto a wing and get comfortable. I kicked the motor into action and we drove down the runway before taking off, into the air..

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07-10-2009, 04:59 AM | Post: #13
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Chapter Six: A great sacrifice

The air was cold, but whenever I flew I felt free, all of my problems would be left with me on the ground. But not today, today I had the pain of loss and future loss gnawing at my stomach and senses. To my side, LilRepper sat, concentrating at the task at hand even though I doubt he had any clue that I was taking us to the heart of the Royal Army, the Village.

Ten minutes past and I could spot mountains underneath the plane, it was beautiful, but then ahead I spotted a large assortment of houses, it must have been the village. "NoobsFTW, Anti Aircraft gun" I heard Repper scream those words before a large shell collided with the plane and sent us spiraling. The air rushed around, I grab held of the controls and tried to pull up but it was no use. The grond neared and my stomach dropped, I turned to Repper who was also screaming. We couldn't bail, and what made things worse it that we would probably die, but I wouldn't let that happen. As the wind pushed against my body, I felt the plane crunch into the ground and my body slamming against what I thought was a rock. The searing pain cut through my defenseless senses and the agonizing pain kicked in, I looked around with all my strength and I could see Repper stuck under the wing of our plane which was now burning "Repper, get up" I tried to scream, but I couldn't wake him. With all my strength I got to my feet and grabbed the wing, which had heated up due to the fire. It burnt my flesh but I didn't care, I ripped it off Repper and dragged him away, and turned back to the plane, limping towards the plane, I kicked it off the edge of the cliff, watching it explode into a house below. Then, the pain rushed to my head, I felt dizzy. "Repper. Repper, get u.." I couldn't finish the sentence, everything went white and I felt my nose being crushed into the hard ground.

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07-10-2009, 05:00 AM | Post: #14
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Slurred words rushed into my ears, I felt dizzy. Slowly I regained my vision, everything was blurry, the sunlight rushed into my eyes. "Noobs, get up. Royals are coming, please wake up" I looked, it was Repper, shaking me awake. "H-how long have I been lying here?" I rubbed my eyes, which gave my vision a much needed boost. "Ten minutes at the most, now get yourself up. Take your rifle and fight" I mustered a smile "I've got you covered. I wont let you down" with that I grabbed my shotgun that was lying on the floor nearby, and my rifle which was lying next to it. I slowly walked over to the ridge where I kicked the plane off and activated stealth. I could see about fifty Royals walking past the church, my stomach dropped. I looked through my scope and took at shot, my stealth flushing from my body. The Royals picked up the pace, and I shot more, dropped heads with every bullet. They returned fire but Repper and I just took cover, waiting for it to stop and firing more. I was pumped, but the Royals didn't stop, they kept coming. They reached the Guard post, my heart pounded against my ribs "Repper, we run back. We must retreat back to the houses behind us, come on" I ran, jumping off the other side of the cliff and running up a hill to the house, I kicked down the door and jumped inside. Repper followed, and started to move the furniture to make a barrier, we had compiled a good barrier with three tables, two cabinets and several chairs. I turned to Repper, he was as scared as me, we couldn't survive this, and if we did there would be hundreds of Royals in the Village, probably in the houses but they would still hunt us down. I couldn't see much, I started to fade out again, it was either fear or my wounds, but I kept backed against the barricade. I looked over the top and the Royals came flooding up the hill, "This is it" I grasped my cold rifle hard, and pulled the trigger, I shot the leading Royal straight in the head, he collapsed and his comrades returned the fire, tearing up the face of the house, luckily not breaking through the barrier.

We carried on this fighting for only minutes before they approached once more, I swapped for my shotgun, back against the barrier. I sighed, I wouldn't die until I've rescued Cheesewoo and Electronoob, and until then I wont let myself be defeated. A loud crack of more gunfire broke out, not against us however, it was directed at the Royal force. I looked over, and the fifteen or so remaining Royals collapsed, dead. Behind them stood two more Royals, one holding a rifle and the other holding an SMG. They approached us, I didn't fire, neither did Repper, we just waited. They both wore a red Beret without any top and Royal Paratrooper bottoms, the Commando had a knife stuck in the waistband and the Soldier had a two large bullet belts crossed over his torso. They approached are barrier and dropped their guns "We're not here to kill you. We are rebels, discharged from the Royal Army for disobeying Goodman's orders. Your here because of the Nationals who crashed in the Village, aren't you" asked the Commando, picking up his gun once more. "Yes, I'm grateful for what you did. But we must move out, the Nationals you mentioned are my friends and I'm going to save them" I followed Repper and we jumped over the barricade. The Commando looked me in the eye and grinned "I'll help. Oh and by the way, I'm Guerrilla and this is Peanuts" this 'mercenaries' seemed nice, but I wasn't sure about them.

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07-10-2009, 05:01 AM | Post: #15
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"Fine Guerrilla, you and Peanuts can join us. Repper and I could use the extra fire power" I smiled back, so did Repper. "Oh, I'm LilRepper and this is NoobsFTW" Repper introduced us both, he seemed happy to meet some rebel Royals such as himself. "Well then LilRepper and NoobsFTW. We should start by finding somewhere safe to rest. We have a house that the Royals don't usually search that would be ideal for a short rest before it turns dark, because that's when we should be able to find your friends" I nodded, and the mercenaries started to lead us through the Village. Repper, Guerrilla and myself used stealth, but Peanuts just cocked his SMG and laughed "Screw stealth, Burning Bullets will just tear me a safe pathway".

We arrived at a house facing the ladder that lead up to the church, Peanuts opened it and we all went inside. Guerrilla lit a lantern which gave the house light and took a seat in a red armchair "Peanuts will show you upstairs, you can get some rest if you want" I followed the Soldier upstairs and he pointed to two beds "You and your Royal friend can sleep here, I'll be downstairs with Guerrilla if you need anything" I was happy for once, it was actually nice to have some place that I could rest. Repper had already collapsed on a bed, so I took the other and fell onto it, it felt like heaven, it was something soft, my eyes closed and for once I smiled and meant it. For once the dreams of death and destruction didn't flood my mind, instead I had nothing, just a deep rest that I knew I would probably never have again.

What felt like an eternity later, I felt cold hands grasp my shoulders and shake me awake "It's night. We must go" I rubbed my eyes, and looked to who woke me. It was Guerrilla, while Peanut woke Repper. "Okay, lets go" I jumped out of the bed, ready to see my friends once more. I ran downstairs and grabbed my rifle and slung it on my back, then picked up my Shotgun waited for Guerrilla, Peanuts and Repper to come down. In no less than a few seconds they all came down stairs, all ready to leave. I opened the door, and we all left "I think I know where they might be hiding. Just down the alley there's a house I've seen two people run into" I started to walk "Lets just hope the Royals are too drunk to patrol tonight" Repper laughed, and we all walked down the alley way. As I took every step, something inside me leaped, it's been a while since I've seen my best friends and comrades and I wish for nothing else. We made it, to the house that Guerrilla had pointed out, the cold night air made the anticipation so much worse. I turned the handle and pushed the door open, inside sat Cheesewoo and Electronoob, their guns pointed straight at my head. My friends, they were safe "Cheesewoo, Electronoob. Your S-safe" I couldn't muster anything else. They stood up, dropping their weapons and smiled.

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07-10-2009, 05:03 AM | Post: #16
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But nothing ever stays good, as I was about to drop my weapon, shouts broke out, it was the Royals. "Men, we all must leave. Run to the roadblock, there is a jeep. We can get to the coast from there" Guerrilla was a good Commander, his orders were clear. We all sprinted to the roadblock, Royals now on our tail. We arrived at the jeep and Guerrilla, Peanuts and ElectroNoob stayed out. They formed a line "Go now. We'll hold them off, there isn't room for us anyway. We can buy you some time" ElectroNoob turned to me and saluted "It's been an honor, now take Cheese and Repper and be off, I know what I must do" I wasn't just going to let my friends sacrifice themselves for me "No, we will all go. We can run, please" I started to shake, my eyes started to water "Please, we can make it, don't stay behind" they wouldn't budge, they where set on buying us time "NoobsFTW, we will see you again. But you must unite the Nationals together and win this war, for all of are sakes. This is my part in this war, making sure are hero can survive" I looked, the Royals would be here in a few seconds. "This is an order, you take Cheesewoo and LilRepper and you win this war for use. I don't want to hear any disobedience, we'll see each other again" I wouldn't defy Electronoob, he was a higher rank and a good friend. I made my way into the jeep with Cheese and Repper, and started up the engine. "Go, we will be okay. It's time we show the Royals what it means to stand united" I drove, I knew what I had to do, but all the time I silently sobbed, I couldn't just leave my friend. As I turned I watched the gunfight break out, and I saw a bullet fly straight past them all, hitting Electronoob, he collapsed onto the floor...

That hour the three brave Soldiers sacrificed all to buy time for the Nationals last hope. Guerrilla, Peanut and ElectroNoob stood against all odds and fought for their friends, there actions would hopefully bring unity to the Nationals and win the war for them. Now it was up to NoobsFTW and his comrades to write their own history, given a blank page and the ink by their friends Guerrilla, Peanut and ElectroNoob.

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07-10-2009, 05:04 AM | Post: #17
ProtoNoob 
Finally, all finished. I've transferred all the chapters from the Broken Thread to this new one. So I hope we all use this thread now..Well, now I'll just wait to see if everybody has moved threads.

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07-10-2009, 05:15 AM | Post: #18
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Any reserved posts for new chapters? OR IS THIS THE END?! NOOOOOOO! Also glad it's all in one place now Smile As well as that make sure the link in your siggy is changed and also put the link into first post of old one so people who watching the old thread/bookmarked it will know theres a new one since you can only see the link now if you go to "New Reply". That is all Big Grin

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07-10-2009, 05:20 AM | Post: #19
ProtoNoob 
Done all of that, and I changed the first post of the broken thread to the link to this thread. Now lets just hope I can get my views high again :/

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07-10-2009, 05:20 AM | Post: #20
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Wait...what about the other things like the bug from before? I think it would be good if i mentioned that the "Post Reply" needs only to be clicked on ONCE! NOT 2, 5, or OVER 9000 times. I'm good; I clicked the button once. And I'm glad I presented the warning. Whether anyone cares about it or not.

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