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13-04-2012, 01:55 AM |
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13-04-2012, 01:56 AM |
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13-04-2012, 01:58 AM |
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13-04-2012, 09:12 PM |
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GeneralVonWolfen
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STORY BUMP
DEAL WITH IT THIS STORY IS INSANELY GOOD [/url]
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14-04-2012, 03:24 AM |
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14-04-2012, 06:36 PM |
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GeneralVonWolfen
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Page bump.
What da fuq is the matter? I put everything in one place. No commentary? [/url]
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14-04-2012, 06:50 PM |
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iamdumb123
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not bad but its not so good as delta 32 or as this 2 generals will be
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14-04-2012, 08:29 PM |
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MilesVonKarma
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GeneralVonWolfen, why would you turn the Ace Combat 5 Unsung War story into your own..? If you go to Ace Combat Skies, there are plenty of stories. Base yours of theres. This is a complete rip off of the story.
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15-04-2012, 02:33 AM |
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Richy_Greenback
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(13-04-2012 09:12 PM)GeneralVonWolfen Wrote: STORY BUMP No its not, its really truly not. |
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15-04-2012, 02:35 AM |
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(14-04-2012 08:29 PM)MilesVonKarma Wrote: GeneralVonWolfen, why would you turn the Ace Combat 5 Unsung War story into your own..? If you go to Ace Combat Skies, there are plenty of stories. Base yours of theres. This is a complete rip off of the story. /agreed |
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18-04-2012, 12:27 PM |
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MilesVonKarma
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(15-04-2012 02:33 AM)Richy_Greenback Wrote:Agreed. Nobody likes a story that's taken from a plotline of a good game. Even this one. Make another one please, and DON'T use any other AC plots for them. Doing so means you can't write, yet alone find something proper.(13-04-2012 09:12 PM)GeneralVonWolfen Wrote: STORY BUMP -MVK |
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18-04-2012, 12:31 PM |
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MilesVonKarma
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Also:
“COME BACK! COME BACK! YOU FORGOT YOUR HELMET, YOU part of the female anatomy!” No. Just plain no. First off, if you're copying this from AC5, don't add in anything stupid. Secondly, that makes no sense. Nobody is going to fly a fighter jet without their helmet, simpleton. Third, I'm suprised nobody cares about that joke you made about Grimm. You sure you don't have one yourself? Or are you not as great as a digital fighter pilot named "Grimm"? Good day. -MVK |
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18-04-2012, 05:09 PM |
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RR0IALss
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tl dr tbh
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18-04-2012, 11:22 PM |
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GeneralVonWolfen
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(18-04-2012 12:31 PM)MilesVonKarma Wrote: Also: Alright, alright! Jeez, talk about roughly criticized... OK, how about this? I JUST DELETE THE WHOLE BLOODY THING!? [/url]
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18-04-2012, 11:27 PM |
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19-04-2012, 12:04 AM |
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19-04-2012, 12:23 AM |
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RR0IALss
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21-04-2012, 12:19 AM |
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GeneralVonWolfen
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(19-04-2012 12:23 AM)RR0IALss Wrote: Sad? HECK NAW I HATED THIS STORY THE MORE I READ IT! I FELL ASHAMED FOR COPYING THIS FROM THE BEST AIR COMBAT GAME OF ALL TIME! /end of rant [/url]
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21-04-2012, 12:36 PM |
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Spek.
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Tl;DR
Copied story, VonWolfen rages, story deleted. |
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21-04-2012, 04:35 PM |
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GeneralVonWolfen
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(21-04-2012 12:36 PM).:Jeremy:. Wrote: Tl;DR You can STOP NOW. >:[ [/url]
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