[Story] Operation Zerox-sign ups still open

[MapleHeroes]

Despite the fact it had some grammar errors. I will sign up a character.


Name: Fritz Bach

Faction: Nationals, militiaman

Rank: Private, preferably, can be anything else 'cause like Sigma said, you ARE the writer

Age: 18

Weapons:
-Gewehr 71 rifle
-Dreyse M1907 semi-automatic pistol
-A small knife
-Panzerfaust

Equipment:
-Civilian clothing
-Field cap
-Black boots
-1 extra clip for his M1907 pistol
-3 extra clips for his ancient rifle

Bio/Info:

He was born in the capital of the National Federation, where his father worked as a tool crafter and his mother stayed at home, unemployed. He would often spend his time around the city, known to be away from home for as long as a week. He knew the streets of his city very well. He also had an eye for many things. He stole quite frequently and had a criminal record before his conscription into the National militia. He is versatile, he can adjust to his surroundings quite well, learning that while in the city. He fights with pride, but also in hopes of returning home and to see another day. When asked about the conditions, he usually would respond, "Oh its okay, some shellings here and there, dead guys showing up unexpectedly, and some Royals that like to bash us around, but we like to hit back, 'cause thats what you gotta do in a fight."

He doesn't have much respect for his superior, but for one in the militia, he is a solid soldier.

[Xsleet]

i need one more sign up of a nat soldier for the next part. Be aware one guy will be killed off instantly.

[Xsleet]

by the way, maple you have been accepted. You will be part of a scouting team for the next chapter. Thats all im giving away.

By The Way, CHAPTER TWO HAS BEEN EDITED, AS I HATED THE OLD VERSION

[SigmaSlugger]

im the one being killed right? if not i am going to be sad. i purposefully created a douch so he could die first

[Xsleet]

sigma, yes. But because i liked your war story you wont die in the first min

[SigmaSlugger]

DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD: YOU READ MY STORY?!?!?!?! how was it? do you like the idea of a sequel? and sorry for off topic lol.
On Topic: thanks for me being the one to die.. 'preciate it ;D

[DesertWolf]

I've sign-up withdrawal.

Name: Stefan VonStein

Faction: Nationals

Rank: What ever you you need/want

Age: 29

Weapons: 2 MP40's, combat knife, "Mister Hammer" light-weight sledge hammer.

Equipment: Standard issue military uniform, comical amount of ammo, smoke grenades.

bio: Stefan certainly is an odd soldier. He is of average skill and build, being on the short side, and he even follows orders. His rather odd attribute is that he often use's sub-machine guns at the same, despite his CO's constant yellings. He takes an almost inhuman amount of joy of causeing pain to his enemies. His favorite method of delivering his specail brand of pain is with a light-weight, albeit random sledge hammer affectionately named "Mister Hammer." He is a quiet guy, who takes too many risks and has no problem being a distraction.

[zhongsifu]

Mike isn't a captain.

[Xsleet]

fixed zhong.
and desert, added. Now we has the manpower to start chapter three!
Hell Yeah

[zhongsifu]

You might want to fix up your grammar while you're at it.

[Xsleet]

CHAPTER 3 HALFWAY DONE- GONNA BE LONG

[Xsleet]

Damn, since chapter three was going to be far too long ive been forced to split it into 2, chapter four will have all the action.

[SigmaSlugger]

(18-01-2012 05:55 PM)Xsleet Wrote:  of whom many of these soldiers at the table had seen me and my friend john at the frontline.

his name was jack ;D and nice chapter btw! no action but as you said, its all in ch.4! I don't quite understand though, why hansels in the group if he's good for sh*t, lol. but again, your story. keep it up, i'll be waiting for ch.4 diligently

[Xsleet]

Yeah sigma,despite hansel being a complete arrogant bastard he is a 'skilled soldier' Who will serve as cannon fodder. Do ya want your chars death to be tragic or insanely stupid? And btw the fact that a skilled writer is slightly intrested in my story has inspired me to work harder. I will fix the jack thing, thanks for spotting that, and also change the way the main titles are made, and with the little time left today ill start on chapter four, and complete it and publish it tommorow.

[Xsleet]

extra note- multiple fixes have been made
bump

[DangerDave17]

Name: Dave Jones
Faction: Royal

Rank: Classified/freelance: Does contracts for a Royal and Nationals

Age: 23

Weapons:
Harry's Hand Cannon
SvD

Equipment:
Gas Mask (on his side)
Stealth Elixir

Abilites (A perk-ish type of thing):
A presence you'll remember
Since being a man of war he always leaves his place onto people
Uncanny Speed
He also was a Track Star in high school and have always ran 2x as fast as others
Advanced Intelligence
Dave's not your average royal hes quick to thing on his feet
Smooth Talker
Dave has a way with words hes always been like this

Clothing:
Maverick shaded Glasses
A Grey Collared Shirt
Bunny Ears
Blue Burly Jeans
Leet Shoes

Bio/Info:
"was a child with uncanny abilities now one of the most feared Men in the war" people say but hes more of a guy with many talents but hes appeal is what those "other/odd" soldiers wear.

I hope you put this guy in your story

good luck

[T3riFic.]

The story was AWESOME. Thanks for including me. Really appreciate it. Can't wait for more.

[BFStar555]

Name: Steinzer DerSchnitz-Kuriounne von Lanchesteppe
Nickname: Steinzer

Faction: National
Personality: Very Evil - Gives mercy but only if forced to

Rank: Field Marshal

Uniform:

-Field Marshal's Cap - With National Emblem on front center
-Black Suit - With National Emblem somewhere on top front
-Sleek Black Trousers - National Emblem Waistband/Belt
-Black Leather Boots
(Black, Black, Black, Black - Basically replicating an Schutzstaffel/Nazi high ranking soldier)

A supposedly evil villain that doesn't die until the end of the story.

Abilities:

-A high command
-Can execute his own comrades for one reason or another
-Can launch jets/V2 rockets

-The best ranking National knife, gun, speed abilities, stealth, etc. (You choose those)

Always good to have one of those characters in the story!

And note I said Field Marshal so that Lord (something that starts with an X or something) you mentioned in the beginning chapter........is his higher ranking command.

The connection between the two of them is like Megatron and Starscream.......if Steinzer fails he gets punished but never killed by (that guy who I forgot the name of)

[Xsleet]

Thanks ziza , chap 4 coming out withing the hour, even though my hand is kinda injured.

Steinzer you will carry out the next missions blueprints, probably in Chap5

Dave jones, your added in the chap4 im making right now :DDD

[BFStar555]

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA