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10-05-2012, 06:52 PM | Post: #141
Stormy-StrayWolf 
New lyrics verse ^^ Audio is available here: http://www.4shared.com/video/V4NKL-Eu/Spit_Remix_2.html

I explain the subliminals at the end aswell <3


Spit Remix

Cos you know it's my time, I rise again.
Messiah with a bloody pen.
Figure out the flukes, fakes and failures like Sherlocks friend.
What's on the radio? People that are all pretend.
I'm living what I've written, don't joke or it's a clowns death.
Love me till the sun shines. Don't say that we're only friends.
I'm a beast on the mic, spitting till the final end.
Party groove and soul clap, I play it back and back again.
I showed biz the A.G. He said he doesn't run with them.
Tetrahydrogestrinone, Dwain on some funny sh*t.
Trial for the Tigers. Back to running 60 quick.
Wolf on the scene, raise game by burning it.
My respect ain't due but I'd say I'm earning it



Subliminals explained:

"Cos you know it's my time, I rise again.
Messiah with a bloody pen." - This bar is fairly simple. I rise again like the Messiah supposedly did. The bloody pen is because my lyrics kill ;P

"Figure out the flukes, fakes and failures like Sherlocks friend.
What's on the radio? People that are all pretend." - This one is more complex. The end of the first line links with the start of the second. I say that I'll "figure them out, like Sherlocks friend" Sherlock Holmes was a detective who (in one of the films/series) wasn't actually that amazing and his friend Watson always had to help out. This follows onto the second line which starts with the words "What's on", this could also be heard as Watson. See the link?

"Don't joke or it's a clowns death.
Love me till the sun shines," Clowns make jokes, that's fairly simple. But there was a song released by a member of a famous band called The Kinks, it was called Death of a Clown. The B-Side to this song was called "Love Me Till The Sun Shines"

"I'm a beast on the mic, spitting till the final end.
Party groove and soul clap, I play it back and back again.
I showed biz the A.G." - When I record this it'll be on the instrumental of a song called Spit by Showbiz and A.G. Here I mention songs by the duo "Spitting" is a reference to their song "Spit", they also did a song called "I'm A Beast". Their debut EP was called "Party Groove/Soul Clap". I then use their actual names (although slightly broken up) when I say "I showed biz the A.G."

"He said he doesn't run with them.
Tetrahydrogestrinone, Dwain on some funny sh*t.
Trial for the Tigers. Back to running 60 quick." - Tetrahydrogestrinone is a type of steroid that got sprinter Dwain Chambers banned from competing, stopping him from running. Hence the "He said he doesn't run with them" part. During his ban he went on trial for the Rugby team the Castleford Tigers. Eventually the ban was lifted and he won medals in the 60m sprint.

"raise game by burning it." - Play on words. I raise the game with my lyrical skill, but I also RAZE (burn) the competition

Thanks for reading
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10-05-2012, 07:32 PM | Post: #142
GhotiGhost 
Less heavy in style - but more complex. Glad you supplied the notes - makes it more interesting to understand the background to the lyrics..

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10-05-2012, 08:11 PM | Post: #143
Stormy-StrayWolf 
Thanks GG Heart

Yeah I was getting a bit tired of the aggressive style I was previously using, so I decided to swith it up and go for using subliminal metaphors Big Grin

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10-05-2012, 08:13 PM | Post: #144
FlaSh[b]aCk 
You're so... much more smarter (my grammar is exceptional isn't it?) than I thought you were.

You totally gonna have to start uploading your accapellas on youtube soon.

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10-05-2012, 08:43 PM | Post: #145
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(10-05-2012 08:13 PM)FlaSh[b]aCk Wrote:  You're so... much more smarter (my grammar is exceptional isn't it?) than I thought you were.

You totally gonna have to start uploading your accapellas on youtube soon.

Get on TS NAO! I've got a beat for it and I can show you ^^

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10-05-2012, 09:11 PM | Post: #146
FlaSh[b]aCk 
Sorry but uh... this is like 1 hour too late and I don't even have TS aviable right now :|

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11-05-2012, 02:58 AM | Post: #147
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Audio download now available: http://www.4shared.com/video/V4NKL-Eu/Spit_Remix_2.html

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11-05-2012, 03:05 AM | Post: #148
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I came up with 3, 1 verse songs about different colored markers while in the shower :D
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11-05-2012, 10:01 AM | Post: #149
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Always feeling jelly when I visit this thread. :<
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11-05-2012, 02:35 PM | Post: #150
Stormy-StrayWolf 
(11-05-2012 10:01 AM)HC.Gracious Wrote:  Always feeling jelly when I visit this thread. :<

And so you should do :3

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12-05-2012, 01:55 AM | Post: #151
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Bumpity

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19-05-2012, 01:53 PM | Post: #152
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Bumpity :>

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24-05-2012, 10:56 PM | Post: #153
FlaSh[b]aCk 
Bump :>

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24-05-2012, 11:00 PM | Post: #154
MyThumbsHurt 
I see you're currently slow jerking to this Flash?
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24-05-2012, 11:07 PM | Post: #155
FlaSh[b]aCk 
Not anymore.

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24-05-2012, 11:18 PM | Post: #156
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Did you get tired?
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25-05-2012, 08:27 AM | Post: #157
FlaSh[b]aCk 
Yes, yes I did.

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25-05-2012, 10:00 AM | Post: #158
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Not sure how to feel about that... Dodgy

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25-05-2012, 10:17 AM | Post: #159
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You like it, just like you like me.

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04-07-2012, 04:32 PM | Post: #160
Stormy-StrayWolf 
Another lyrics verse. I was pleased with this one. Been inspired recently by Rewd Adams and Genesis Elijah. I explain any subliminals at the end. Feedback appreciated Heart


On Another Level

It's about time you f**kers start checking my smart rhymes.
Rewind, go into google and see what you find.
I'm spitting on a whole other level of intellect.
Rhymes over your head, like a Messerschmitt in effect.
You know I Spit Fire, I'm a Hurricane leaving you dead.
Don't step, you can't cos I'm chopping off both of your legs.
I'm a rap fiend, write with a bloody pen.
See me? You can't, your eyes are taken outta your head.
I'm on a rise up, like City when they got bought out.
Looking to the sky, I see red clouds. My time is now.
You got beef? Well quarter of me is from Iran,
So I'm Cyrus the Great, nah f*ck that man I'm Genghis Khan.
Benno was like check this beat it's from Timbaland.
I was like "I'm the only one repping the f**king Midlands"
And I ain't even from the ends, I'm from up in Manny, North.
Checking onto Blizzard and Shifty, they're repping Manny raw.
Checking onto Lunar and Jack Flash, the North is yours.
You haven't even heard of them? Get back to the drawing board.
Stray Wolf has come, you're all b*tches, you're done.
I'll rip into your flesh and take out your breathing lungs.


Subliminals explained:

"It's about time you f**kers start checking my smart rhymes.
Rewind, go into google and see what you find."
- Most people don't even catch onto the subliminals I fit into my verses, go and google some of the subject matter from the lines that you don't understand and you'll realise how intelligent some of them actually are.

"I'm spitting on a whole other level of intellect.
Rhymes over your head, like a Messerschmitt in effect.
You know I Spit Fire, I'm a Hurricane leaving you dead."
- Because my rhymes are on such a level of intelligence they go over peoples heads, like a plane does. A Messerschmitt was a plane used by the Germans in World War 2. I use word play on the "Spit Fire" line. A Spitfire was a plane used by the British in World War 2, also I spit fire. A Hurricane was another plane used by the British in World War 2.

"Don't step, you can't cos I'm chopping off both of your legs."
- Simple one. You can't step to me if you've got no legs.

"See me? You can't, your eyes are taken outta your head." - Simple again. Can't see me if you've got no eyes Wink

"I'm on a rise up, like City when they got bought out." - When I say City, I mean Manchester City, the football (or soccer) team. They were a side that generally finished around mid-table untill they got bought by wealthy Arab owners and rose up to win the Premier League.

"You got beef? Well quarter of me is from Iran,
So I'm Cyrus the Great, nah f*ck that man I'm Genghis Khan."
- I'm 1/4 Iranian, Cyrus the Great is seen as being one of the greatest military leaders of all time, he was Iranian. Genghis Khan was another great military leader. Note: I'm pronounce Iran as I-rahn. Not I-ran or I-rain.

"Benno was like check this beat it's from Timbaland.
I was like "I'm the only one repping the f**king Midlands"
- My friend Ben (Benno) wanted me to a remix to a song produced by Timbaland. There's hardly any rappers who represent the Midlands.

"And I ain't even from the ends, I'm from up in Manny, North.
Checking onto Blizzard and Shifty, they're repping Manny raw.
Checking onto Lunar and Jack Flash, the North is yours."
- Manny is a nickname for Manchester. Blizzard and Shifty are two Manchester rappers. Lunar C and Jack Flash are from West Yorkshire which is also in the North of England.

"Stray Wolf has come, you're all b*tches, you're done." - Stray Wolf is my alias. A b*tch is a female dog as well as an insult. Wolves are very closely related to Dogs and the males are superior the females in their social order. So me being Stray Wolf and calling everyone else b*tches is me saying that I'm lyrically superior.

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