Lyrics&Poems of Stray Wolf (Stormy/Pvt. Peaceful) | NEW LYRICS - Send for Derry

[Stormy-StrayWolf]

Kill Yourself Remix

I come at your mans spitting with a fire tounge, spitting with a lion song, spitting like a chosen one.
Coming at me with your fam, you aint brave. I leave your mans looking shook like a shockwave.
Guns shoot when I come to play game.
You shoot blank like a clock with no face.
I come with mad ways to devestate.
Like Madden; 350 gameplays.
On track I don't stop fighting.
Lyrics like fireworks, keep on lighting.
Fire flies when I step to the room.
Left dead if you enter my booth.
We all know that your life's been a fluke.
Time's come but you can't see the truth.
I break fools as I like through the iris,
Bars so cold they were made in the ices.


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Any feedback is appreciated.
New lyrics (not yet finished). This is something that I'll probably record at some point seeing as I have a beat to work to aswell (see end of post for the instrumental).
Also, there's a line in here that most of you won't get:
"I come with mad ways to devestate.
Like Madden; 350 gameplays."
This is a reference to the game Madden 11. Look at the left hand side of the back cover below and it explains itself.



Instrumental:

[FlaSh[b]aCk]

Wow. I suddenly got even more respect for you. This is good.

Some of my own stuff: (still not as good as that .__.)

Time heals all wounds. Yet time is our greatest enemy.
Time is the reason we fight to stay alive.
Yet time is the one who will kill us all.
When the time has come, you will realize I am not the one you think.
I am your greatest enemy, and time is on my side.

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Tears are supposed to cleanse your soul.
So how come I still have stains upon mine?

[Stormy-StrayWolf]

That first poem was some deep shiz O_o

I just wrote some more random lyrics cos I was bored ^^

Better than Lil Wayne, better than 50 cent, better Jigga Jay?
Nah.
But I'm better than you though, mans so clueless you should be playing cluedo.
Yeah, I'm the first generation.
Cos after me all these mans will be imatating.
Don I'm waiting,
In the shadows to strike first.
I might burst,
Guns out and watch your fam die first.

[FlaSh[b]aCk]

Yah. I have dozens of more poems. But some time ago someone had to delete my phone memory, so almost every single one disappeared Anyways, might be posting more, but all of them are old.

And dude, everyone's better than Lil' .__.

[HC.Gracious]

I like Lil' Wayne - A milli
:3

[Stormy-StrayWolf]

A Milli has a good beat but I don't like Wayne

[Snadwich]

*Thumbs Up*

[Stormy-StrayWolf]

;D Love for teh Snaddy <3

[Jonzzon]

Feedback on kill yourself remix as per youre request:

its to cocky

that is all...

(words n stuff aint my thing, i prefere visual stuff :3)

[Stormy-StrayWolf]

That's the whole idea though ;D

[FlaSh[b]aCk]

Then I suppose the lyrics are quite good

[Jonzzon]

(06-11-2011 12:44 PM)Pvt. Peaceful Wrote:  That's the whole idea though ;D

i know, just think it would be interesting to hear a humble raper. i dont realy got anything agains hip hop, rap and whatever musicaly, i just get sick of the gangstah "im so cool dawg" sh*t...

[Stormy-StrayWolf]

Yeah it's generally not my style. If you look back at the OP you'll see I normally don't do this kinda stuff but it's good to try new things.

[Jonzzon]

Ha yeah thats true

[FlaSh[b]aCk]

(06-11-2011 01:13 PM)Jonzzon Wrote:  i know, just think it would be interesting to hear a humble raper.

What now? O_o

[Jonzzon]

misspelling but now that you point it out it would be interested hearing a humble raper...

[Stormy-StrayWolf]

Lmao xD

[FlaSh[b]aCk]

I agree. For some reason :|

[Stormy-StrayWolf]

Why you bring srsness to this thread? :|

[FlaSh[b]aCk]

I dunno. I can make it go away though :3