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25-08-2010, 08:15 PM | Post: #261
ThorThunder 
Here is a story I wrote a while back.
It would be nice to receive some feedback on it, as I've only gotten a reply from Zhongsifu stating it's "a pretty awesome story, considering English isn't your native language." (Although that could perhaps be counted as an achievement, considering it's Zhongsifu's comment Big Grin )

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25-08-2010, 08:29 PM | Post: #262
SufferBaron 
... I hate being like this... but who is Zhongisfu?

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25-08-2010, 08:42 PM | Post: #263
ThorThunder 
He is the proud leader of the Grammar Nazi (It says so in his sig too.)
He seems to magically pop out of nowhere whenever you claim that your post's grammar is absolutely correct and points out the dozen mistakes you haven't noticed. Tongue

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25-08-2010, 08:58 PM | Post: #264
SufferBaron 
If he'd correct Protocol Delta, I'd personally order a V2 Vengeance strike on his account. Whoever he is.

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26-08-2010, 12:30 AM | Post: #265
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(25-08-2010 08:58 PM)SufferBaron Wrote:  If he'd correct Protocol Delta, I'd personally order a V2 Vengeance strike on his account. Whoever he is.

I'm afraid the Grammar Nazis have hacked into your V2 control center. Your technicians are currently stabbing themselves with office supplies as they are Rick Roll'd on every screen in the base. Have a good day. Tongue
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26-08-2010, 01:15 AM | Post: #266
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(26-08-2010 12:30 AM)Zachary0015 Wrote:  I'm afraid the Grammar Nazis have hacked into your V2 control center. Your technicians are currently stabbing themselves with office supplies as they are Rick Roll'd on every screen in the base. Have a good day. Tongue

That's what she said.

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03-09-2010, 04:46 AM | Post: #267
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(26-08-2010 01:15 AM)SufferBaron Wrote:  
(26-08-2010 12:30 AM)Zachary0015 Wrote:  I'm afraid the Grammar Nazis have hacked into your V2 control center. Your technicians are currently stabbing themselves with office supplies as they are Rick Roll'd on every screen in the base. Have a good day. Tongue

That's what she said.

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10-09-2010, 02:10 AM | Post: #268
godzillaboy100 
I think this place is dead.
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10-09-2010, 04:20 PM | Post: #269
SufferBaron 
Lies.

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10-09-2010, 04:44 PM | Post: #270
K.U.S.T. 
Then why do you not add any more stories? I have two already written and I submitted the first one, but still, it has not gone into here, yet. Sad

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10-09-2010, 07:26 PM | Post: #271
godzillaboy100 
Yeah. I have written a story already and waited for you to reply. After that this thing just died. You really should look into to this more SufferBaron.
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11-09-2010, 11:03 PM | Post: #272
K.U.S.T. 
I'd say that if he can't step up in acquiring more stories, this thing will die off and may be unstickied

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11-09-2010, 11:26 PM | Post: #273
godzillaboy100 
Very true. SufferBaron/Matrix, you really should pay more attention to this or at least let someone else manage it.
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11-09-2010, 11:41 PM | Post: #274
Zachary0015 
The operator is currently preoccupied. I assume he'll be back soon. Now that school is starting up, we all are a bit more busy.
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11-09-2010, 11:47 PM | Post: #275
godzillaboy100 
I'm sure he is, but he hasn't updated this thing for over a month I think.
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12-09-2010, 02:24 AM | Post: #276
K.U.S.T. 
I sent in my first story BEFORE school started and he hasn't updated, yet he goes around the forums posting everywhere. In fact, he sign up for my book, "Prodition in Origins," which I made after I sent in my application for "Burly Bruce vs Savage Sly." IDK why he doesn't update this any more, but if anything, I think Loutsik's Role-play Library/Database should be stickied up here in place of SufferBaron's Library/Database. At least Loutsik updates his every week, and no-one sends in applications. He has to search for the RP's himself, get the links for them and create a Name of the author and post it under him. Then he has to list every RPer's status, which he checks EVERY WEEK and updates them. Lastly, he ranks them from "Rookie Role-Player" to "Legendary Role-Player."
ALL IN ONE WEEK!!!!!!!ExclamationExclamationExclamation

I doubt that SufferBaron does that...Dodgy

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12-09-2010, 02:26 AM | Post: #277
godzillaboy100 
(12-09-2010 02:24 AM)K.U.S.T. Wrote:  I sent in my first story BEFORE school started and he hasn't updated, yet he goes around the forums posting everywhere. In fact, he sign up for my book, "Prodition in Origins," which I made after I sent in my application for "Burly Bruce vs Savage Sly." IDK why he doesn't update this any more, but if anything, I think Loutsik's Role-play Library/Database should be stickied up here in place of SufferBaron's Library/Database. At least Loutsik updates his every week, and no-one sends in applications. He has to search for the RP's himself, get the links for them and create a Name of the author and post it under him. Then he has to list every RPer's status, which he checks EVERY WEEK and updates them. Lastly, he ranks them from "Rookie Role-Player" to "Legendary Role-Player."
ALL IN ONE WEEK!!!!!!!ExclamationExclamationExclamation

I doubt that SufferBaron does that...Dodgy

+ OVER 9000!!!!

Although I agree that Loutsik does a better job than Matrix/SufferBaron, if we got Loutsik's library stickied, you still wouldn't have your story up because Loutsik's library is for Role-Plays. Matrix/SufferBaron's is for stories, but we should make a new library run by someone who knows how to keep track of things like this.
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12-09-2010, 05:19 PM | Post: #278
SufferBaron 
Are you even suggesting that Loutsik is like.... Matrix v2.0?

Duck-it. Updating.

But ranting at me like that, will just make me mad. And I will destroy all of you.

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12-09-2010, 05:52 PM | Post: #279
godzillaboy100 
Oh yeah? I'll destroy you with mah lazor! So don't even try it.
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12-09-2010, 06:02 PM | Post: #280
SufferBaron 
You want to try to take on SB?

I will get all of my friends to watch >.<

Anyway, it's updated. But Godzilla I can't find any submission from you, would you please be so kind as to re-submit?

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