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12-09-2010, 06:09 PM | Post: #281
godzillaboy100 
I'll take you on! I'll fire mah lazor and use my ultimate weapon

Submission

Death of War
War Story
Here is the link.
I'm sorry, but I don't have Microsoft Word so I can't check how many words there are.
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12-09-2010, 06:14 PM | Post: #282
SufferBaron 
Uploaded. It's fine, don't worry. I'll just do a quick head count.

And by the way, your grammar is fairly good, but sometimes in your story you like... mess up. Undecided It's still a nice plot though. I like it Smile

You can haz 8.5/10 :3

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12-09-2010, 06:20 PM | Post: #283
godzillaboy100 
Yeah, I know. It was my first story so I didn't expect it to be perfect. I'm making a sequel that will be way better!

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12-09-2010, 06:23 PM | Post: #284
SufferBaron 
Well Okay then.

Edit: Just watched Kick Ass. Damn straight.

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13-09-2010, 01:41 AM | Post: #285
Annilator 
A 6/10? Im very confused, but its alright. Im already ending my writting career as we speak. Im ending it with a bang with my final seris.
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13-09-2010, 04:16 PM | Post: #286
SufferBaron 
I lost the plot a little Undecided

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15-09-2010, 10:19 PM | Post: #287
Ugleee 
Rock and a Hard Place
Category: Short Story
Sub-category: War

Also:

POP!
Best-Seller (it won the story contest anyway, so I figure that's worth best seller Smile).
Sub Cat: War

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15-09-2010, 11:47 PM | Post: #288
TommySneak 
Square One
Soon to be novel.
War/Comedy.
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16-09-2010, 12:29 AM | Post: #289
Loutsik 
Congrats on being on the front-page along with me and KUST, Matrix

(0.o)

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16-09-2010, 04:06 AM | Post: #290
doom20010 
The story of a scarred man.
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16-09-2010, 04:17 PM | Post: #291
K.U.S.T. 
I'm on the front page? Important topics or Normal topics, because I sure don't see myself on I.T.

Cheers!
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16-09-2010, 06:23 PM | Post: #292
Ugleee 
(16-09-2010 04:17 PM)K.U.S.T. Wrote:  I'm on the front page? Important topics or Normal topics, because I sure don't see myself on I.T.

If you click the war stories link it brings you to a shade post that lists your Guide to Becoming A Great Writer.

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18-09-2010, 09:25 AM | Post: #293
SufferBaron 
Updated!

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20-09-2010, 08:15 PM | Post: #294
SufferBaron 
http://www.battlefieldheroes.com/en/foru...tid=169879

A New poll, as part of my new "Save The Books!" Scheme. Tongue

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21-09-2010, 02:32 AM | Post: #295
Rickmaster 
Suffer, I don't know if you got it, I uploaded it before, but I want to check again. Here it is:

Title: The Death of a Soldier
Rating: 9/10
Genre: War
Novel
Class: B

Thanks if you get the chance to upload it! It will help me since, no one knows about me too much and I am underrated!

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21-09-2010, 03:04 AM | Post: #296
godzillaboy100 
Hey Matrix, you mind updating Death of War? I revised it, paragraphed it, and made some parts make more sense. So could you change the title to 'Death of War Platinum Edition' You could read it again to re-rate it if you want but, I'm just asking for a title update.
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21-09-2010, 06:03 PM | Post: #297
SufferBaron 
Yeah, you guys I am just finishing my homework then I'm going to the movehs, I'll update when I return.

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22-09-2010, 12:01 AM | Post: #298
Rickmaster 
Forgot to add the Class!

Edited.

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26-09-2010, 10:48 PM | Post: #299
ODST77 
ehh the library thing its not my type

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30-09-2010, 06:25 AM | Post: #300
godzillaboy100 
Hey Matrix, is it alright to add stories that aren't complete? If so, here is my new story:Death of War 2
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