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12-09-2010, 06:09 PM |
Post: #281
godzillaboy100
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I'll take you on! I'll fire mah lazor and use my ultimate weapon
Submission Death of War War Story Here is the link. I'm sorry, but I don't have Microsoft Word so I can't check how many words there are. |
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12-09-2010, 06:14 PM |
Post: #282
SufferBaron
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Uploaded. It's fine, don't worry. I'll just do a quick head count.
And by the way, your grammar is fairly good, but sometimes in your story you like... mess up. It's still a nice plot though. I like it ![]() You can haz 8.5/10 :3 ![]() |
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12-09-2010, 06:20 PM |
Post: #283
godzillaboy100
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Yeah, I know. It was my first story so I didn't expect it to be perfect. I'm making a sequel that will be way better!
godzillaboy100: Sorry monkey with a gun, no headshots for you. Monkey with a gun: FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU *Boom headshot* |
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12-09-2010, 06:23 PM |
Post: #284
SufferBaron
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Well Okay then.
Edit: Just watched Kick Ass. Damn straight. ![]() |
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13-09-2010, 01:41 AM |
Post: #285
Annilator
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A 6/10? Im very confused, but its alright. Im already ending my writting career as we speak. Im ending it with a bang with my final seris.
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13-09-2010, 04:16 PM |
Post: #286
SufferBaron
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I lost the plot a little
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15-09-2010, 10:19 PM |
Post: #287
Ugleee
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Rock and a Hard Place
Category: Short Story Sub-category: War Also: POP! Best-Seller (it won the story contest anyway, so I figure that's worth best seller ).Sub Cat: War ![]() |
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15-09-2010, 11:47 PM |
Post: #288
TommySneak
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16-09-2010, 12:29 AM |
Post: #289
Loutsik
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Congrats on being on the front-page along with me and KUST, Matrix
(0.o) I'm watching you
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16-09-2010, 04:06 AM |
Post: #290
doom20010
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The story of a scarred man.
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16-09-2010, 04:17 PM |
Post: #291
K.U.S.T.
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I'm on the front page? Important topics or Normal topics, because I sure don't see myself on I.T.
Cheers! -The Kingdom of the United Sectors of Terra Xfire: the1real1kust | Steam: blackmesaind |
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16-09-2010, 06:23 PM |
Post: #292
Ugleee
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(16-09-2010 04:17 PM)K.U.S.T. Wrote: I'm on the front page? Important topics or Normal topics, because I sure don't see myself on I.T. If you click the war stories link it brings you to a shade post that lists your Guide to Becoming A Great Writer. ![]() |
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18-09-2010, 09:25 AM |
Post: #293
SufferBaron
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Updated!
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20-09-2010, 08:15 PM |
Post: #294
SufferBaron
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http://www.battlefieldheroes.com/en/foru...tid=169879
A New poll, as part of my new "Save The Books!" Scheme.
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21-09-2010, 02:32 AM |
Post: #295
Rickmaster
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Suffer, I don't know if you got it, I uploaded it before, but I want to check again. Here it is:
Title: The Death of a Soldier Rating: 9/10 Genre: War Novel Class: B Thanks if you get the chance to upload it! It will help me since, no one knows about me too much and I am underrated! ![]() {ACE} The Custodian. That's right, I be the one sweeping... awesomely. The Awesomeness Clan, you can't join if your not awesome... Veteran Role-Player Fourth Generation Writer |
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21-09-2010, 03:04 AM |
Post: #296
godzillaboy100
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Hey Matrix, you mind updating Death of War? I revised it, paragraphed it, and made some parts make more sense. So could you change the title to 'Death of War Platinum Edition' You could read it again to re-rate it if you want but, I'm just asking for a title update.
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21-09-2010, 06:03 PM |
Post: #297
SufferBaron
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Yeah, you guys I am just finishing my homework then I'm going to the movehs, I'll update when I return.
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22-09-2010, 12:01 AM |
Post: #298
Rickmaster
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Forgot to add the Class!
Edited. ![]() {ACE} The Custodian. That's right, I be the one sweeping... awesomely. The Awesomeness Clan, you can't join if your not awesome... Veteran Role-Player Fourth Generation Writer |
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26-09-2010, 10:48 PM |
Post: #299
ODST77
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ehh the library thing its not my type
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30-09-2010, 06:25 AM |
Post: #300
godzillaboy100
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Hey Matrix, is it alright to add stories that aren't complete? If so, here is my new story:Death of War 2
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