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[Story] Protocol Delta - The Twenty Third. |
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12-02-2011, 03:25 PM |
Post: #201
raggedTHORN
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i thought you said i came back as a sheep?
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12-02-2011, 07:12 PM |
Post: #202
JCKaisen
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You do, what I didn't tell you was that there was actually a sheep that came back with The Commander and Wanderer too. I guess I forgot to explain it.
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12-02-2011, 08:15 PM |
Post: #203
godzillaboy100
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Thanks for ruining the epicness, Kaisen...or Suffer...or Matrix...What the hell do we call you?
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12-02-2011, 08:29 PM |
Post: #204
JCKaisen
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Suffekaisetrix.
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12-02-2011, 08:35 PM |
Post: #205
godzillaboy100
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That's fine by me, Suffekaisetrix.
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12-02-2011, 08:36 PM |
Post: #206
JCKaisen
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That's good.
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13-02-2011, 11:04 AM |
Post: #207
raggedTHORN
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(12-02-2011 07:12 PM)JCKaisen Wrote: You do, what I didn't tell you was that there was actually a sheep that came back with The Commander and Wanderer too. I guess I forgot to explain it.gah :/ why can't i be an essential part of the description?
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14-02-2011, 10:37 PM |
Post: #208
ArseenVinct
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I say Jagger lives. He must live!!! :O
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18-02-2011, 04:49 AM |
Post: #209
Lazernails
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Jagger. (>-.-<)
If the plural word for mouse is mice, then shouldn't house be hice? RS ID: Bigdressfof. Find it yourself. Boi! "Red ink. Looks kinda like blood, doesn't it?" A Knifing society is a happy society. A sniping society is... "NO, MASON YOU LOUSY TWO-TIMER! THAT WEBSITE IS RESERVED FOR ME AND ME ONLY!!" |
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19-02-2011, 08:27 PM |
Post: #210
PsychoManiac.
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way to long to read, didnt start
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21-02-2011, 03:56 AM |
Post: #211
Zachary0015
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22-02-2011, 11:12 AM |
Post: #212
Sadron82
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Aww, how I dislike sad endings!!
Epic story! I really liked it. It was nice to read. Kudos for will to write long story.
It is by sitting down to write every morning that one becomes a writer. Those who do not do this remain amateurs. GERALD BRENAN
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05-03-2011, 06:50 AM |
Post: #213
heavyweapons16
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i wish delta survived the royals are barbaric scum!only chief was the one i liked!
/sign right when ya least expect it! |
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05-03-2011, 09:57 AM |
Post: #214
n2000nick
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23-03-2011, 06:47 PM |
Post: #215
teun9
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good story
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23-03-2011, 08:34 PM |
Post: #216
MrDonutz
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I don´t know what to say.
First I didn´t read it, because it was too long, but just an hour ago I started reading it, and I´m speachless. I can´t believe a game can feel so realistic and even make you feel emotional! WTF! This is without a doubt #1 story ever, and if possible, the greatest machinima ever. I feel bad I left Delta. Epic story, bro, keep ´em coming. But not too long, like those ***** Harry Potter movies, what part is it now? ***** 9th? ![]() |
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24-03-2011, 05:56 PM |
Post: #217
n2000nick
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(23-03-2011 08:34 PM)MrDonutz Wrote: But not too long, like those ***** Harry Potter movies, what part is it now? ***** 9th? ehm 7th part now ![]() |
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30-03-2011, 04:57 PM |
Post: #218
Buikschot
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The ending of this story made me shiver. Amazing plot and awesome grammar. Simply amazing.
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10-07-2011, 01:40 PM |
Post: #219
mynameisAlann
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I spend about 1 and a half hours reading this but my god it was worth it, one of the best stories i have ever read.If this is made into a movie this would make you millions XD.I felt sorry for the cheif and how the royals are such ba*t*r*s, very emotinal at times.
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12-07-2011, 02:08 AM |
Post: #220
masterchie123
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I wanna alternative ending!
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