[Story] Protocol Delta - The Twenty Third.

[n2000nick]

(18-12-2010 05:22 PM)ArseenVinct Wrote:  

(18-12-2010 12:50 PM)n2000nick Wrote:  

(18-12-2010 11:08 AM)ArseenVinct Wrote:  And here I was thinking chapter 19 came out. Bummer :/

well sufferbaron is already away for a month or 2 i think

He just bumped 2 posts above you >_>

oh yea didnt notice but he isnt much online on Xfire

[SufferBaron]

Don't worry Comrades, this story won't go untold

[$tanG]

(21-12-2010 03:52 AM)SufferBaron Wrote:  Don't worry Comrades, this story won't go untold

Yay, i'm at part 6 and i really enjoy reading it

btw: since i didnt hear anything anymore last month, are you still searching for members for the ''delta squad''?

[SufferBaron]

No, Delta is dead. Sorry. I'd recommend G-Complex or something similar.

[$tanG]

(23-12-2010 10:59 AM)SufferBaron Wrote:  No, Delta is dead. Sorry. I'd recommend G-Complex or something similar.

okay, i already had that feeling
anyway, almost done reading and can't wait till the next part

[ArseenVinct]

Anticipatingfull (is that even a word) bump

[slayerswod]

love that story!

[JCKaisen]

Okay Guys, One and a half weeks before the

FINALE

of Protocol Delta is available to my audience.

I did have some AMAZING artwork arranged, but the artist has been gone for a month. So that's not going to happen. Oh well.

Anyway, just a heads up! What do you think is going to happen?

[SufferBaron]

Did I just finish the story?

YES I DID

[SufferBaron]

Thanks!

Hey guys, I'd just like to say thanks to all the loyal fans of the book, (who are mostly in my imagination), all of you War Stories regulars and The BFH Team for making such an epic game to base a story on!

I'd also like to thank Zachary0015 and Aries for being so inviting to me when I first joined the War Stories community, and everybody who's helped support and inspire me to write Protocol Delta - The Twenty Third

And ofcourse to the guy who made the banner for it, strads, he's epic and lazy, mainly epic.

Facts

Word Count: 39,868
Page Number (Size 11 Text, A4): 96
Time taken to Write: 14th December 2009 to 11th February 2011
Author: SufferBaron/Matrix/JCKaisen

It's funny, you can see how I improve and home I'm feeling whilst I'm actually writing. I tried to remain consistent but you can still see some variation in my vocabulary and punctuation, some of it is dodgey early on but I definitely improve, this book has really helped my confidence with writing and I hope some day to write a novel.

Notes

YAY I FINISHED IT I R SO EXCITED AHAHAHAHAHAHA

[Royalarmyguy]

Gratz
Mabye me and a couple of friends could do a soundbook, where we are telling the story ^^

[SufferBaron]

That would actually be a fairly epic idea

[Zheiik]

Try a history more short

[TheZeroHero]

Try shutting your face, or writing a story of your own.

[godzillaboy100]

Not epic ending...

(Dramatic pause)

is not epic.

Is the ending supposed to be you ending your squad?

[SufferBaron]

Your opinion is your opinion Godzilla.

[godzillaboy100]

It wasn't my true thoughts on the story, just some random stupidity for good measure.

So about my question?

[SufferBaron]

Yeah, I guess it is me saying goodbye to my Squad. Except I die in it as well, so It's actually Jagger saying goodbye. But Jagger doesn't exist.

[godzillaboy100]

Or does he?

[JCKaisen]

No, he doesn't.