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09-01-2011, 02:54 AM | Post: #1
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09-01-2011, 03:06 AM | Post: #2
NastyMann 
Yeah, I don't expect many people to read this. It's pretty much a novel, once I'll be finished.

But, for those of you who have read Great Expectations, I think you'll enjoy it.

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09-01-2011, 03:09 AM | Post: #3
godzillaboy100 
God damn! That much already?! Well, it's too bad that I hate Great Expectations.
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09-01-2011, 03:10 AM | Post: #4
NastyMann 
(09-01-2011 03:09 AM)godzillaboy100 Wrote:  God damn! That much already?! Well, it's too bad that I hate Great Expectations.

You do? Aww....

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09-01-2011, 03:13 AM | Post: #5
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(09-01-2011 03:10 AM)NastyMann Wrote:  
(09-01-2011 03:09 AM)godzillaboy100 Wrote:  God damn! That much already?! Well, it's too bad that I hate Great Expectations.

You do? Aww....

I'm still going to read it though. How many of the five heroes have you written about anyways? So far, I think there are only four. (Including this one.)
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09-01-2011, 03:25 AM | Post: #6
SilentStrike316 
O_O nice man, keep up the long and good work! Big Grin

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09-01-2011, 03:26 AM | Post: #7
Nightowl12 
Just going to point this out, this is a pet peeve I have about you,
Your first line,
I remember, A ways back when I was still in the royal army, Blablaba, Should be:

I remember- A ways back when I was still in the royal army- Blablabla...

I am Nightowl. I was a fourth generation writer here. You guys are eighth or ninth, I lost count. Anyway, I used to love this game, this forum, etc. But I don't browse here very often anymore.

Anyway, there's a little info about me. Yourself? What are you like?

(Shoutouts to Zach, Dogiedude, Nastymann, Protonoob, Commander, Aries, All fourth and past gen writers.)
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09-01-2011, 03:26 AM | Post: #8
NastyMann 
(09-01-2011 03:13 AM)godzillaboy100 Wrote:  
(09-01-2011 03:10 AM)NastyMann Wrote:  
(09-01-2011 03:09 AM)godzillaboy100 Wrote:  God damn! That much already?! Well, it's too bad that I hate Great Expectations.

You do? Aww....

I'm still going to read it though. How many of the five heroes have you written about anyways? So far, I think there are only four. (Including this one.)

Ah. This one isn't one of them

But he will make a VERY important turning point.

EDIT:

The four heroes are:

Riley Davidson - Zombie Apocalypse (With Farting.)

Jeremy Winefred - The Adventure of Jeremy Winefred

Clay McFatness - Clay McFatness, the Most Fantastic Royal Gunner

Kiram - The Second Chance

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09-01-2011, 03:33 AM | Post: #9
NastyMann 
(09-01-2011 03:26 AM)Nightowl12 Wrote:  Just going to point this out, this is a pet peeve I have about you,
Your first line,
I remember, A ways back when I was still in the royal army, Blablaba, Should be:

I remember- A ways back when I was still in the royal army- Blablabla...

Oh. Thank you!

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09-01-2011, 03:34 AM | Post: #10
K.U.S.T. 
(09-01-2011 03:26 AM)Nightowl12 Wrote:  Just going to point this out, this is a pet peeve I have about you,
Your first line,
I remember, A ways back when I was still in the royal army, Blablaba, Should be:

I remember- A ways back when I was still in the royal army- Blablabla...

Just in case anyone was confused here, Here was a post I posted in my Xfire chat with Nasty:
Xfire chat with NastyMann Wrote:What you put was saying that it was part of the sentence structure. What he put was showing that It's a side comment made by the author. It's like saying, "Today was a good day -- Where are the kids? -- But anyways, it was good."

Something like that.

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09-01-2011, 03:39 AM | Post: #11
godzillaboy100 
(09-01-2011 03:26 AM)NastyMann Wrote:  
(09-01-2011 03:13 AM)godzillaboy100 Wrote:  
(09-01-2011 03:10 AM)NastyMann Wrote:  
(09-01-2011 03:09 AM)godzillaboy100 Wrote:  God damn! That much already?! Well, it's too bad that I hate Great Expectations.

You do? Aww....

I'm still going to read it though. How many of the five heroes have you written about anyways? So far, I think there are only four. (Including this one.)

Ah. This one isn't one of them

But he will make a VERY important turning point.

EDIT:

The four heroes are:

Riley Davidson - Zombie Apocalypse (With Farting.)

Jeremy Winefred - The Adventure of Jeremy Winefred

Clay McFatness - Clay McFatness, the Most Fantastic Royal Gunner

Kiram - The Second Chance

I read it now. Most of the time I kept thinking about the WTF BOOM whenever something weird happened. (I don't know why.) Good story. The part with Estella is a little similar to the South Park parody of Great Expectations.
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09-01-2011, 03:40 AM | Post: #12
Nightowl12 
(09-01-2011 03:34 AM)K.U.S.T. Wrote:  
(09-01-2011 03:26 AM)Nightowl12 Wrote:  Just going to point this out, this is a pet peeve I have about you,
Your first line,
I remember, A ways back when I was still in the royal army, Blablaba, Should be:

I remember- A ways back when I was still in the royal army- Blablabla...

Just in case anyone was confused here, Here was a post I posted in my Xfire chat with Nasty:
Xfire chat with NastyMann Wrote:What you put was saying that it was part of the sentence structure. What he put was showing that It's a side comment made by the author. It's like saying, "Today was a good day -- Where are the kids? -- But anyways, it was good."

Something like that.

If you are still confused, Let me give an example.

"I like pop tarts- Which we're always out of- And egg nog"

I am Nightowl. I was a fourth generation writer here. You guys are eighth or ninth, I lost count. Anyway, I used to love this game, this forum, etc. But I don't browse here very often anymore.

Anyway, there's a little info about me. Yourself? What are you like?

(Shoutouts to Zach, Dogiedude, Nastymann, Protonoob, Commander, Aries, All fourth and past gen writers.)
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09-01-2011, 03:45 AM | Post: #13
godzillaboy100 
(09-01-2011 03:40 AM)Nightowl12 Wrote:  
(09-01-2011 03:34 AM)K.U.S.T. Wrote:  
(09-01-2011 03:26 AM)Nightowl12 Wrote:  Just going to point this out, this is a pet peeve I have about you,
Your first line,
I remember, A ways back when I was still in the royal army, Blablaba, Should be:

I remember- A ways back when I was still in the royal army- Blablabla...

Just in case anyone was confused here, Here was a post I posted in my Xfire chat with Nasty:
Xfire chat with NastyMann Wrote:What you put was saying that it was part of the sentence structure. What he put was showing that It's a side comment made by the author. It's like saying, "Today was a good day -- Where are the kids? -- But anyways, it was good."

Something like that.

If you are still confused, Let me give an example.

"I like pop tarts- Which we're always out of- And egg nog"

You use commas to separate things like that.

Ex:

My sister, who lost her death monkey, likes using toe jam for her PB and J sandwiches.
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09-01-2011, 03:47 AM | Post: #14
Nightowl12 
Godzillas sister- whom lost her virginity at age 12- Is now a respectable business woman. (Tongue)

I am Nightowl. I was a fourth generation writer here. You guys are eighth or ninth, I lost count. Anyway, I used to love this game, this forum, etc. But I don't browse here very often anymore.

Anyway, there's a little info about me. Yourself? What are you like?

(Shoutouts to Zach, Dogiedude, Nastymann, Protonoob, Commander, Aries, All fourth and past gen writers.)
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09-01-2011, 04:01 AM | Post: #15
godzillaboy100 
(09-01-2011 03:47 AM)Nightowl12 Wrote:  Godzillas sister- whom lost her virginity at age 12- Is now a respectable business woman. (Tongue)

I HAZ NOE SISTAH FOOLZ!
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09-01-2011, 04:15 AM | Post: #16
Zachary0015 
(09-01-2011 03:26 AM)Nightowl12 Wrote:  Just going to point this out, this is a pet peeve I have about you,
Your first line,
I remember, A ways back when I was still in the royal army, Blablaba, Should be:

I remember- A ways back when I was still in the royal army- Blablabla...

Actually, no it shouldn't. Grammar FTW.

Dickens FTW as well. Can't bear to read A Tale of Two Cities, though. :P
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09-01-2011, 04:17 AM | Post: #17
godzillaboy100 
(09-01-2011 04:15 AM)Zachary0015 Wrote:  
(09-01-2011 03:26 AM)Nightowl12 Wrote:  Just going to point this out, this is a pet peeve I have about you,
Your first line,
I remember, A ways back when I was still in the royal army, Blablaba, Should be:

I remember- A ways back when I was still in the royal army- Blablabla...

Actually, no it shouldn't. Grammar FTW.

Dickens FTW as well. Can't bear to read A Tale of Two Cities, though. Tongue

Why is it that during a grammar correction, the first guy fails beyond epic proportions by the second guy correcting him? Either way, it happened to Night twice in one correction by me and you.
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09-01-2011, 04:17 AM | Post: #18
Nightowl12 
(09-01-2011 04:15 AM)Zachary0015 Wrote:  
(09-01-2011 03:26 AM)Nightowl12 Wrote:  Just going to point this out, this is a pet peeve I have about you,
Your first line,
I remember, A ways back when I was still in the royal army, Blablaba, Should be:

I remember- A ways back when I was still in the royal army- Blablabla...

Actually, no it shouldn't. Grammar FTW.

Dickens FTW as well. Can't bear to read A Tale of Two Cities, though. Tongue

Actually, If your trying to get the point across it does. Such as in the cirque du freak Series, Darren Shan continously uses -blablabla- in his sentences.

I am Nightowl. I was a fourth generation writer here. You guys are eighth or ninth, I lost count. Anyway, I used to love this game, this forum, etc. But I don't browse here very often anymore.

Anyway, there's a little info about me. Yourself? What are you like?

(Shoutouts to Zach, Dogiedude, Nastymann, Protonoob, Commander, Aries, All fourth and past gen writers.)
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09-01-2011, 04:18 AM | Post: #19
K.U.S.T. 
I believe that if you are to start one of those side comments with a prep, it is a comma, but only if it relates to the subject being spoken about. It should be separated by dashes if the comment has a separate meaning from the sentence or sentence topic.

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09-01-2011, 04:18 AM | Post: #20
Nightowl12 
(09-01-2011 04:17 AM)godzillaboy100 Wrote:  
(09-01-2011 04:15 AM)Zachary0015 Wrote:  
(09-01-2011 03:26 AM)Nightowl12 Wrote:  Just going to point this out, this is a pet peeve I have about you,
Your first line,
I remember, A ways back when I was still in the royal army, Blablaba, Should be:

I remember- A ways back when I was still in the royal army- Blablabla...

Actually, no it shouldn't. Grammar FTW.

Dickens FTW as well. Can't bear to read A Tale of Two Cities, though. Tongue

Why is it that during a grammar correction, the first guy fails beyond epic proportions by the second guy correcting him? Either way, it happened to Night twice in one correction by you and I

Bold=fixed, I win.

I am Nightowl. I was a fourth generation writer here. You guys are eighth or ninth, I lost count. Anyway, I used to love this game, this forum, etc. But I don't browse here very often anymore.

Anyway, there's a little info about me. Yourself? What are you like?

(Shoutouts to Zach, Dogiedude, Nastymann, Protonoob, Commander, Aries, All fourth and past gen writers.) (This post was last modified: 09-01-2011 04:19 AM by Nightowl12.)
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