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First Story - The Factions War - FactorSeven - 23-05-2012 02:08 AM
The sun was set high over a village.. There were deafening explosions of tank rounds and rocket launchers. Bullets swarmed every nook and cranny of the village. Welcome to Victory Village!
William, a Royal Soldier, remained taking cover in a small passage between two houses. He prayed and prayed for him not to be impacted by one of the blazing bullets. He rushed out of the small cover, exposing himself to Commando range views. He dipped behind a Royal jeep, spraying bullets through a corner."EAT THIS, YOU NATIONAL TRASHBAGS!" he yelled. As soon as he finished yelling insults and swear words, he was shot in the stomach by a raging National gunner. Was this the end of his life?
EDIT: I'm not very good at making up characters, so why not join in? Just give some simple facts about your soldier and you'll be joining in the nightmare. Also, tell me how the prologue was.
RE: First Story - The Factions War - AlphaDawg - 23-05-2012 02:34 AM
Clif, a volatile Royal soldier, sees William take the bullet. Spraying randomly, he runs for the jeep....
(You take it from here)
RE: First Story - The Factions War - FactorSeven - 24-05-2012 01:30 AM
Chapter 1: The Run
Clif ran to William's aid. He frantically took out his medic's box and bandaged the bleeding William. The blast of a Keg and Rocket Launcher blasted Clif and William to the fountain. Clif, with his volatile personality, went off and began a duel a National Gunner that had drawn his machine gun on him.William woke up from his unconscious state and crawled over to his Chopper. His hand was stomped on and kicked over. He looked up at the stomper and saw a familiar face. Wait, he knew this face. But who was it?
Before William could be stabbed, the familiar person was shot in the head and dropped dead. Clif helped his partner up to his feet and hurried him out of the battle zone."Come on, come on! Try to walk! Bloody hell!" Clif cleared out a doorway of rubble and set the near-dying William to a wall."Come on, don't die, soldier! Okay. Here's what we're going to d-" his directions were interrupted by an explosion, which blew away one of the house walls."GET TO YOUR FEET!" Clif held up William, and ran. They ran across roads, jumped over roadblocks, and reached a small lake in the rear of Victory Village.
"I'll go get some help, you stay here." Clif handed a Magnum to William."If I don't return, you're on your own. Use this gun to protect yourself from any trashbags coming." with that said, Clif hurried off to the death-promising battlefield.
To be continued....
Chapter 2 will be coming tomorrow. As I said before, you can join in if you want to.
RE: First Story - The Factions War - SN0CONE - 24-05-2012 03:43 AM
Hmm! I like the prologue! Its pretty detailed.
Why not add me!
My guy is called
Richard Yubly, but people call him Yubs.
He's a kind hearted Royal medic, that is pretty good at saying the funniest words for the perfect time.
Though when in battle, he has a dark humorous side when killing.
RE: First Story - The Factions War - Agent___Jack9 - 25-05-2012 12:52 AM
add me, i go by J or Agent J
im a mando who is unseen and loves to stab nats in the back and if they are too far, then how about a throwing knife
also, who else uses mr pistols other than me when playing the game?
RE: First Story - The Factions War - Agent___Jack9 - 25-05-2012 12:55 AM
Agent J suddenly appears behind the nat gunner, stabs him in the back and turns around and throws a knife at the other nat behind him, hitting him between the eyes and buying his friends a few minutes to heal before the next wave comes.
How was that for a next part?
RE: First Story - The Factions War - Agent___Jack9 - 25-05-2012 12:58 AM
Yubs, especially happy because he just came from a killing spree, comes and informs the 3 that they have paratroopers that are going to come in in about 2 minutes.
RE: First Story - The Factions War - Agent___Jack9 - 25-05-2012 12:59 AM
Was that good Yubs? did u like how i presented u?
RE: First Story - The Factions War - FactorSeven - 25-05-2012 01:00 AM
Chapter 2: The New Guy
The sun set over Victory Village. The Royals had lost and had to retreat before any more men were sacrificed to the Nationals' strategy.Bodies lay useless everywhere, and William...was left in his small cover to die. Clif had to run for it, or he too, would be dead.
It was morning, and the Royal camp was noisy with angry Royal insults, mad generals, and other things you would see in a military camp. But today, a new guy would come. "The General has summoned all to the mess hall. Be there, or be yelled at! HAHAHAHA! You should've known it was me." The speaker shut off ,and every Royal walked to the mess hall ,which was basically a large tent." I have gathered all of you useless idiots today to remind yo uof what happened yesterday. YOU THINK THIS IS KIDDY PLAY?! HUH?!" the general spit as he yelled. Clif, who still grieved the death of William, just watched the general yell countless insults.
Then a guy walked in, and put himself next to the general. "He looks a lot like William. He almost looks exactly like him, too." Clif thought to himself.
"Alright, pretty girls, meet our newest recruit, Richard Yubly. He will be one of the medics in the battlefield. So you barbies better respect him!"
It was night, and everyone was preparing themselves to head on to Riverside Rush."Hey, new guy, here's your gun!" Clif tossed over a Tommy's Typewriter. "Whoa, do you have any idea how cool this is? But it doesn't type, does it?" Yubly joked. "Hey, you remind me of an old friend I had, who died in the Victory Village battle. His name was William."Clif noted. Yubly then put a serious face."Wait a minute, William? He's my brother! How did he die?!"Yubly frantically asked."I know how you feel. He was like my brother, too."Clif tried to calm him down. Other Gunners then came over. "Hey, newbie, you might want to get serious on this stuff. It isn't funny." one of the Gunners reminded him."It ain't funny for Clif, either. Now come on, people, let's pack up." Everyone went back to packing up and worrying about dying.
Explosions could be heard in the distance. Clif remained calm, Yubly was freaking out, and all the others made silent prayers.
"Alright, listen up! When we enter the battlefield, I want you to use all your force! Stay alive and show those Nationals who's boss!" the general boosted up the morale. Everyone except Clif cheered."Hey, Yubly-"
"You can call me Yubs, Clif." Yubs said.
"Okay, Yubs. You just stick to me, alright? We don't want a new recruit dying today."
The Royals marched up to the battlefield where countless explosions blasted dirt and grass into their faces."CHARGE!!!!" the general shouted, and all the royal soldiers ran and fired their weapons."Follow me, Yubs!" Clif shouted.
"OH GOD, OH GOD, OH GOD!" Yubs was literally screaming like a girl.
Clif hurried Yubs into a small passageway. He took out a Bill's Bomb and hurled it behind the Nationals' cover. The explosion sent Commandos flying out behind the concrete fence.A National Gunner caught Clif by surprise and shot him in the back. Yubs fired his Tommy's Typewriter everywhere on the Gunner. The dead gunner dropped to the floor and Yubs hurried to Clif.
He used the special technique "Combat Medicine" on Clif. He quickly healed and stood up.
Suddenly, Clif's and Yubs' vision went black.
To be continued....
Chapter 3 will be headed our way tomorrow. Don't forget to tell me how the story is. Also, join up if you want to!
EDIT: Jack, I'll put you in tomorrow's chapter. Thanks for joining!
RE: First Story - The Factions War - Agent___Jack9 - 25-05-2012 01:04 AM
William goes on anyway to the battlefield, trying to hold off the enemy for as long as possible.
nice story so far
RE: First Story - The Factions War - Agent___Jack9 - 25-05-2012 01:05 AM
oops, i didnt see that last post because i didnt refresh, ignore my latest post
RE: First Story - The Factions War - FactorSeven - 25-05-2012 01:06 AM
RE: First Story - The Factions War - Agent___Jack9 - 25-05-2012 01:27 AM
Can i save William when Clif leaves and go to my own campsite or back to base but arrive after everyone left for battle?
also, it would be nice to be shot by a sniper or something in the arm (everybody else is getting wounded, I should join in)
My character likes to stick to the shadows and should probably have a nice lightweight sniper rifle (so it doesn't weigh me down)
anyway, great job!
RE: First Story - The Factions War - Agent___Jack9 - 25-05-2012 01:28 AM
friend me factorseven
RE: First Story - The Factions War - SN0CONE - 25-05-2012 04:28 AM
Wow! Thanks for adding me in this story! Wasn't really expecting that much of an importance! I thought I'd be more of an extra who got killed off early! Thanks!
I love the format of your second chapter also! It looks really nice on how you spaced it out!
The story really seems like it is gonna be big,
I'm wondering how many chapters are you planning to make?
RE: First Story - The Factions War - Agent___Jack9 - 25-05-2012 03:03 PM
Is this half RP, half War Story?
anyway, can't wait for the next chapter and i will tell the people that i am playing with on the servers to come look at the story. It needs more attention.
RE: First Story - The Factions War - Agent___Jack9 - 25-05-2012 03:05 PM
friend me snocone, or is ur friends list full because it wont let me friend you
RE: First Story - The Factions War - FactorSeven - 26-05-2012 12:27 AM
Chapter 3: Captured
The sun rose over the horizon. Clif woke up to see himself tied to a chair, next to Yubs."Wh...What happened? What's going...on?"Clif was half knocked out. Yubs didn't respond, who was completely unconscious.
Suddenly, a door opened. Clif could not believe who had walked in. It was the dead National he had killed before he could stab William.
Victory Village was silent and eerie. Only the breeze made scary noises. Agent J, who was sent to survey the area, walked to the Roadblock capture point. He walked behind the concrete fence and heard some grunting. He walked toward the small lake-pit and saw William almost dying. He hurried to him and helped him up."Hey, you alright?" A.J. was looking at the bleeding bullet hole from the Gunner.
"Pl-please...help-p me..." William could barely speak in his critical condition.
"I'm going to get you out of here. Just hang on in there, alright?" He wrapped more bandages over the worn bandages Clif had put on him.
"Clif....where's Clif?" William looked around weakly.
"Don't worry, I'll have you at camp before dark." A.J. helped him up out of the lake-pit, and walked him past the blown house, the roadblocks, and the dead bodies whose belonged to dear friends of William.
The National had not died. He had an evil smile on his face.
"So, it's you. The one who tried to kill me. How pathetic. You have failed to do so." the National taunted.
"You're a big piece of trash, you know that? Once I get out of this craphole, I'll put a bullet in your head." Clif barked back.
"Ha ha ha. It seems that is impossible, my friend. You're a prisoner-of-war. I'll see to it tha tyou rot in here." the National turned to leave, revealing the bandaged area that was very red with old blood.
Yubs woke up and looked around. "What is this place? Where are we? What happened?"
"We're prisoners-of-war." Clif looked at the closed door with an angry face.
"Where did you find him?" The general was amazed that William was still alive."Get his to the Medical tent now!"
"I found him dying in the lake-pit at Victory Village. He was lucky I heard him calling for help." he set his Super Roderick Rifle down on a jeep.
"Well, A.J., you've earned yourself a day of rest and no battle. Enjoy."
"Thank you, sir." A.J. was proud of what he did.
A.J. walked over to the Medical tent and found William sitting upright."How you doing? You feel better?" A.J. looked at the healing bullet hole.
"Better that the lake-pit. Can I go walk around the camp a bit? I need some fresh air." William stood up and left through the flaps of the tent.
Clif and Yubs were let out of the chairs, so they walked around the room looking for a possible escape route.
"Hey, what about the vent?" Yubs looked at the tight vent that was on a wall.
"No, that's too small for us. Looks like we'll have to be here for a while."
"Hey, look what I found!" Yubs took out a hidden Rocket Launcher from a secret door on the floor.
"What's THAT doing here? Those Nationals are more stupid than they look." Clif held up the Rocket Launcher and aimed it at the wall.
The Launcher let out the big cloud of exhaust through the back, and the rocket blew away a big portion of the wall.
"Hey, what's going on there?" a National guard looked at the blown wall.
"TAKE THIS SUCKER!" Clif swung the RL at the National guard''s face, knocking him out and sending him flying.
"Let's go!" Yubs ran for one the National jeeps and turned on the engine. He pressed the gas and sped his way out of the prison.
"Hey, you're that guy...ehm...William! Yeah, William! I heard you were near dying. You're lucky A.J. found ya!" a Commando shook William's hand.
"Yeah, it's good to be alive." William walked past other Royals and stared out at the wide range. "Wherever you are, Clif, take care."
Chapter 4 will come tomorrow, as you know! Don't forget to join up if you want to!
SN0CONE: I'll probably be making 10-15 chapters. Thanks for reading!
RE: First Story - The Factions War - SN0CONE - 26-05-2012 05:46 AM
And you are actually a really decent writer, so I'm gonna love reading this!
Though I suggest if you plan more than 5 chapters, you should set it up in 1 Big Post. Just use spoiler tags.
RE: First Story - The Factions War - Agent___Jack9 - 26-05-2012 07:15 PM
This story is so cool
i cant wait for the next chapter, great job as always