Chapter 1
Beggining
If you are reading this this is a long story for the great soldiers for nationals.The Royals have taken allmoste over Victory Village.My mission was to kill the Royal Capitan.Lemnov.I went on the curch but the capitan went stealth then i cudnt kill him.When i went to the road block evry national was dead.
To Be Continiud
My first story pleas be polite and say how do you like it rate it
Hmm. You said it was a long story, but the first chapter seemed really short.
Also you ought to work on your spelling.
(continued, beginning, almost, church, captain, couldn't)
Don't forget that the word "I" is supposed to be capitalized every single time, no matter even if it isn't the start of a sentence.
But if you keep working on it, I bet you could probably turn this into a great story.
go to grammar school then try again on writing a story. Nuff said
