Battlefield Heroes

Its rated R for
Intense Sequences of Bloody Violence
Disturbing Images In Your Head!

Could you review Jake Styles, too?

Yeah, I guess. Wake up again BFH!

XD, you don't have to now, if you don't want to. I just want some feedback on it.

Todays 3rd straight review! LOL!

Review: Jake Styles, National Smart Guy

It only took me about a minute to read this. Its not short, its not long, its neutral. The story is basically about a dumb person having his adventures. Its said that he is smarter than a Royal. Is he? It seems that a Royal is smarter because they dont fill their guns full of cotton balls. I would too if I would play a trick in a bank robbery. Anyways, grammer is nothing to worry about, so nothing about it... except for the chapter length. Make it longer please and this review wont take 5 seconds. The characters are once again, filled with life. The comedy is very classic and funny! Who watchs the PowerPuff Girls any more?! Laugh out loud funny! Besides the comedy, its pretty good. Jake Styles will have to get a... 4.7 out of 5 Stars! Be happy! Prefered Rating: PG-13

You have not reviewed a single RP, and unless you are planning to, then remove the Role Play from the title, it is misleading. And RPs can not be reviewed, because you have to wait until they are done, and then they are just stories. So you should remove that, because it makes no sense and is misleading. Thank You.

~Loutsik, Head of the RP Department of the WaSP

P.S. The reason I included that ^ is because what I wrote is coming on behalf of the entire WS and RP communities and not from me.

Forum Bug.

Edit: I might as well use this bug for something.

Don't lvl up HS. And remove that point from keg. All that matters is FF and LegIt at your lvl.

Your build should be.

0Keg
0IEG
1HS
2LegIt
5FF

Part 3 of the Royal Version of The Battle of Sunset Showdown is complete and is so long( Sorry about it being long there was just a lot of ideas I had wanted to put in it.) that it took 2 posts to finish.

(04-07-2010 10:27 PM)Loutsik Wrote: [ -> ]You have not reviewed a single RP, and unless you are planning to, then remove the Role Play from the title, it is misleading. And RPs can not be reviewed, because you have to wait until they are done, and then they are just stories. So you should remove that, because it makes no sense and is misleading. Thank You.

~Loutsik, Head of the RP Department of the WaSP

P.S. The reason I included that ^ is because what I wrote is coming on behalf of the entire WS and RP communities and not from me.

Im planning to. I just need to find an awesome one first.

Try Loutsiks RP NECROPILIS!

I will try to read it.

Well, EA failed, and so it kind of died because Ea deleted the RP section, and then turned the forums offline right after that. When I got back, I found that everyone that was in the RP except for digital candy and me had left BFH. With no one to post there, it fell down, and then died. Soon after that I left BFHs myself, but came back a week ago .

I'll be interested on what your review says.

Loutsik im sorry about Necropilis.:(Id be happy to join as by now im a seasoned RP participater.I also would like to finally thank you for the RP addvice you gave me when I first tryed to join Necropilis.:)The plot was good but EA FAILED! May the old Necropilis R.I.P. but let a new version be born.

I am thinking of making a new First and Only RP, because a lot of new RPers are here. But my core of RP veterans, as I told you, left, so I am afraid that this new one will not live up to my high standards.

I am planning it to be quick, only a few pages, so I can test how these new RPers do. If they are good, I will make a fourth 1st and Only RP. Maybe some writters will also join Leroy Grant and his Regiment's fight in a futuristic world against the might of the Royals.

And Commander, you are free to join

Sounds good to me thank you.

(04-07-2010 11:25 PM)Commander356 Wrote: [ -> ]Loutsik im sorry about Necropilis.:(Id be happy to join as by now im a seasoned RP participater.I also would like to finally thank you for the RP addvice you gave me when I first tryed to join Necropilis.:)The plot was good but EA FAILED! May the old Necropilis R.I.P. but let a new version be born.

Hmm. You are seasoned? Maybe you will taste nice... Here. Give me your hand. I will nibble it to see.

Not funny Nanoace.

Knot funny?

Ok its kinda funny.

I come with MASHED POTATOES AND GRAVY!