Didn't have time to read all of this (read up to beginning of page 3), but I am willing to sign up for this review/interview thing. It would be nice to review my new story "A Message For Salvation." Used to be a failed RP, though.
Happy Holidays from me and others from the War Stories and Role Play Review Center! Well, its time to review something, so once again Happy Holidays from me and others here from the Review Center! Peace... And Happy 5,500th views Review Center!!!!
And also, we ahve done over 15 reviews this year alone! So, thank you for picking us as your number one review center!
This story was rated two fours, but could use some work. Here is our review of Death Zone.
Review:
Okay, it doesn't look like a HollyWood blockbuster nor does it look like a piece of garbage. Its just a good story. The plot is very small, but interesting in a way that readers can explain. Sorry readers, no spoilers from here. The characters are described, but not described enough to make you feel like you are there. The grammar is okay. Chapter lengths are short, but sweet. The story could use alot of work before becoming the ultimate story. This story isn't like watching a Chuck Norris film, but it's enough to keep you glued. And, it's one of the only stories that have a cover picture. But, overall, this story is interesting. This story deserves 4.1 Stars out of 5.
Prefered Rating: PG-13
Personal Note: Keep trying your best and you can get this story into greatness, if you have the appropriate time.
Author: Majoric
Crime is a sight to see when things don't go wrong. Here is our review of the forum's first real crime story, UnderGround.
Review:
One thing to say... its regular. The story is basically of a smuggling business for the Nationals. Well, it doesn't make sense when they don't tell you how much they are paying you to smuggle in those weapons. This is a twist of crime and war, so basically, it is a tid-bit confusing. The grammar is good, but I prefer more longer chapters. The characters are described at a regular rate, but not enough. This story could use more work and needs more effort. But overall, this story deserves props. It gets 3.9 Stars out of 5.
Prefered Rating: PG-13
Personal Note: Keep trying and you will be fine.
Author: Blackjack_ Seven
One thing that this story does not have is a title that makes sense. Here is our honest review of Journey to The Edge of War.
Review:
Stories like these deserves props, but not alot of props. This story is basic and is like any other you will find. Except, the fact that the dialogue is basically in the form of a script. That gets a little confusing. I can't blame you, but it would be nicer if everything was put into a more organized order. But, the grammar is good and the chapter length is good also. Characters are described well and the story is interesting. The plot needs a little more spice, but overall it is good. It gets 4.3 Stars out of 5.
Prefered Rating: PG-13
Personal Note: Try your best and fix these problems.
Author: Scrumpadoochous
Here is an RP review that will blow you outta the sky if that is possible and that if your flying somewhere for Christmas. Here's the review of The State.
Review:
Bow down to MY superior might! Well, don't do that because I am not the leader of the evil State in The State. Well, that was a mouthfull. Anyways, the story is wonderful and filled with a great plot that even hill-billies can understand. Well, if they could understand anything. The number of characters is high and interesting detail from those who participated. I wasn't around enough, but I knew that I was gonna have fun. The detail is so high, that it is like teaching the whole history of World War 2 in 30 seconds. In high speed. The grammar is good, but some characters were missing from the main story. They might have gotten killed or just arrested for eating Loutsik's chicken sandwhich, which I wanted. But, anyway, the RP is amazing and never fails to disappoint, well to NightOwl, Loutsik fails. To everyone though, he is talented. I give his famed RP 5 Stars out of 5!
Prefered Rating: R
Personal Note: Amazing! keep at it Lout!
Author: Loutsik
A log about an experiment. This story is about to raise your eye-brows cause it is interesting. Here is our review.
Review:
Science kinda gets boring without... explosions and bullets. You know that? Well, now that changes with the Experiment Log! An interesting story of an experimental soldier. The grammar is good and the chapter length is good as well. The characters are explained in detail and the organization is unique in words of a story. Description is great and the story keeps on interesting readers like its Chuck Norris vs. Bruce Lee. Just so you know, Bruce Lee wins. No offense Chuck Norris and friends. Anyways, overall this story is amazing and good. Also addictive. Anyway, this story gets 5 Stars out of 5!
Prefered Rating: PG-13
Personal Note: Congrats friend! Keep it up!
Author: Poalino
Luke, Zach, Myself, Aries, Proto, And any other Writer would disagree about Everyone loving Lout cept for me..
But you Rpers..
^^What are you saying?
Looks like this is getting more popular than usuall.
A sad day has arrived for one of our writers today. He is also our double co-host for the WSARPRC. His name is NightOwl12, a good and talented writer. We will miss him. He is stuck in our memories, as those who have left.
Author: NightOwl12
Service: 2009-December 12th, 2010
A never forgotten friend...
It's sad but inevitable, slowly everybody will leave. I've lost my friends BubbleBut, TerranVa, EbonyKnife/IvoryBlade/SirKurity and Cheesewoo
(10-12-2010 06:14 AM)K.U.S.T. Wrote: [ -> ]Didn't have time to read all of this (read up to beginning of page 3), but I am willing to sign up for this review/interview thing. It would be nice to review my new story "A Message For Salvation." Used to be a failed RP, though.
Well, I could use an extra hand over the week.
(13-12-2010 02:31 AM)ProtoNoob Wrote: [ -> ]It's sad but inevitable, slowly everybody will leave. I've lost my friends BubbleBut, TerranVa, EbonyKnife/IvoryBlade/SirKurity and Cheesewoo
Bubblebutt was a writer!? :O
Nah, Bubblebut didn't write. We where just good friends when we played together, howcome? You know him?.
yes, we kicked royal but (Pun alert) on the Battlefield
