Hallo, Gast!
Homestead. [Chapter 2.] |
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04-05-2012, 11:18 PM |
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WeaponShark
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We all rode in the troop transport.
The most bulkiest, biggest, sturdiest, vehicle you've ever seen. " You alright man? " Jimmy said. He added quickly; " You seem quite lately.. " I shifted towards him. " I'm fine, its good, man. " I said. " Are you sure? Is it the Colonel " he replied. " The Colonel doesn't bother me, you know, he's just my authority. " I chuckled. " Hah, yeah, " Jimmy put in, then his head drifted to the right at Corporal, and they started a conversation. A rattling of bullets, and echoes of thunder screamed passed the cars, as a bullet zipped pass the middle of us, and the troop transport began to steer off-road. " Oh my God! " they all exclaimed, releasing words of swear. " DUCK DOWN PRIVATE, DUCK DOWN " the Seargent yelled, like a dragon. There was a burn in the truck tank, gasoline was pouring, we had no time to live. Jimmy gave a glance at me, fear was in his eyes. He looked back in terror and I clutched his arm and threw him out the back of the troop transport, and dove after him, hitting the dirt pavement. " WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR ? " he shouted. " Saving your life ey, I saw the gasoline pour the tank. " Silence filled, as we heard the explosion from in back of us, and all the memories were shattered. __________________________________________ To Be Continued. |
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04-05-2012, 11:36 PM |
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WeaponShark
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So what do you think?
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04-05-2012, 11:59 PM |
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Assassinlad
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I think it was very nice, would like to see more in the future.
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05-05-2012, 12:02 AM |
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RR0IALss
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cool, try writing a book.
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05-05-2012, 12:43 AM |
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WeaponShark
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(04-05-2012 11:59 PM)Assassinlad schrieb: I think it was very nice, would like to see more in the future. Chapter 3 will be here soon. |




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