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13-04-2012, 07:41 PM | Beitrag #1
sirhoper 
- It is the story of two generals, Major General Mundungens Taylor from the Royal Kingdom, and Brigadier General Alan Asbach from The National Federation. It was nearly the end of the war, Mundungens and his troop were waiting near Victory village, while the Federation advanced and conquered seaside, riverside and some archipels like Wake island. The Royals knew that the war was over and that they have lost. Mundungens and his men were the last troop, their role was to defend the capital Victory village. The men were afraid, they feared the nationals because they knew that the national army is much bigger than theirs. Mundungens tried to encourage his men, he reminded them that they were defending their wifes and their children. Slowly the men became angry, Taylor has lit a fire of rage in their hearts, now they knew that it was time... time to die.

At the same time, Alan Asbach was planing the attack with his right hand komandant Hans Heinziger. He knew that his army could easily win the battle but he wanted to make sure that they kill Mundungens. Asbach hated Taylor since he was a young killer with the mission to kill him, every time they fought his hate grew bigger, he wanted to torture him and to see the light leaving his eyes. He left the tent, gave the sign and the soldiers began to move. It was the begining of the end.

Mundungens saw the smoke of the tanks and heard the sound of the march of the soldiers. suddenly one of the nationals looked at him, Taylor trembled, it was a look that he had never seen before; a look full of hate,as if the man was only born to kill him. The general had no time to think about that because the nationals moved fast, he closed his eyes, he knew that this was his last battle.

It was a bloody fight as the nationals broke into the royal defense line. the enemy tanks were hiting the buildings so they fell on royal soldiers. Mundungens looked to his left, he saw that a pistol was aimed towards him, instantly a bullet shot through the air and before he could he could do anything something jumped in front of him and fell to the ground.

Mundungens looked to his feet, that was not only a lifeless body,that was the body of his best friend/pilot Ted Turbington. Taylor could not believe what he had seen, Ted has once saved his life and now he was dead, Taylor raised his pistol in the air and shot.

National soldiers soon caught him and arrested him, but this was not important for him beacuse he had finally taken revenge, he had killed Alan Asbach.-

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13-04-2012, 07:56 PM | Beitrag #2
sergiooo 
ah...i am not going to read that
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13-04-2012, 07:56 PM | Beitrag #3
BobyCar99 
Sorry didnt have time to read it Big Grin

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13-04-2012, 07:58 PM | Beitrag #4
Fiktio 
(13-04-2012 07:56 PM)sergiooo schrieb:  ah...i am not going to read that

Honestly: you are at war stories part of forum. What did you expect?
Only two or couple of words and the end?

C'moon.

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13-04-2012, 08:01 PM | Beitrag #5
PT-PIRATE 
(13-04-2012 07:58 PM)Fiktio schrieb:  
(13-04-2012 07:56 PM)sergiooo schrieb:  ah...i am not going to read that

Honestly: you are at war stories part of forum. What did you expect?
Only two or couple of words and the end?

C'moon.

he can see the post on bfh main page Wink

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13-04-2012, 08:01 PM | Beitrag #6
sirhoper 
This is the trailer of my new story (The stories of the two generals) if u want to know more about the adventures of Mundungens and Alan, or about How Ted saved Mundungens life, Just PM me or post +1 Generals
ITS IMAGANARY HEROES, AND IT WILL WIN THE WAR

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13-04-2012, 08:08 PM | Beitrag #7
AnonymKILLer!! 
nice story
lol, took me like 10 hours too read
but nice Big Grin
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13-04-2012, 08:11 PM | Beitrag #8
Mr-erik4boss 
Yeah good story keep it up
+1

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13-04-2012, 08:15 PM | Beitrag #9
1_sec_to_cry 
Nice Story! but.. let me remember.... mundungus fletcher... HARRY POTTER?!?!?!

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13-04-2012, 08:18 PM | Beitrag #10
sirhoper 
yeah same name but different story

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13-04-2012, 09:03 PM | Beitrag #11
fabrisius 
+1 generals Smile

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13-04-2012, 09:11 PM | Beitrag #12
sirhoper 
(13-04-2012 09:03 PM)fabrisius schrieb:  +1 generals Smile
thank u man i really need supporters to continue the story

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14-04-2012, 03:36 AM | Beitrag #13
GeneralVonWolfen 
Being a General myself, I can appreciate a good story like this. Smile
+1

PS Check out my RP story Demons of the Sky if you get a chance. Wink

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14-04-2012, 06:20 AM | Beitrag #14
AlphaDawg 
Kind of short I guess... but you did a good job. It's easy to read. You spelled everything correctly.

Read my story in my siggy if you get a chance.

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14-04-2012, 06:27 AM | Beitrag #15
FancySniper 
Why do the nationals always die?

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14-04-2012, 09:00 AM | Beitrag #16
sirhoper 
(14-04-2012 03:36 AM)GeneralVonWolfen schrieb:  Being a General myself, I can appreciate a good story like this. Smile
+1

PS Check out my RP story Demons of the Sky if you get a chance. Wink
thank u man i will check it right now

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14-04-2012, 09:02 AM | Beitrag #17
sirhoper 
(14-04-2012 06:20 AM)AlphaDawg schrieb:  Kind of short I guess... but you did a good job. It's easy to read. You spelled everything correctly.

Read my story in my siggy if you get a chance.

its only a trailer if i get a lot +1 i will write the rest

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14-04-2012, 01:50 PM | Beitrag #18
sirhoper 
(14-04-2012 06:27 AM)FancySniper schrieb:  Why do the nationals always die?

they always die because they are the bad ones Tongue

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14-04-2012, 03:41 PM | Beitrag #19
lord9diablo 
nice +1

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14-04-2012, 03:44 PM | Beitrag #20
GENERALS0.1 
Good , next time , add some pictures and that would be awsome , either take and edit in game pics , or draw'em up ..... creativity is the way !

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