you must die!

[G0lD-StTaR]

Somewhere in a sand war village in Iraq, the soldiers are waiting from the call of duty near theyr jeeps
(Cpt.Tomy):
-Today is the time to revange our lost brothers from the cold war.Brother, today is a new day, today is the day when we will win.
(Lt.Diemar):
-Youre right brother,look at all those soldiers, are waiting with theyr bullets on the rifle to DIE!
When cpt.Tomy is smoking his cigars a boom sounds disturb the quiet.When the driver turn on the jeep engine,Bang it exploded.Cpt.Tom is blast away by the power of the bang.
When he try to wake up, he is a little dissy, he hears some strange voices, he sees hes brother, lt Diemar.He crowels to himand he yale at him:
-BRother,Brotherr,brotherrrrr!!!!!
POW!Someone smack him in his head from behind with a rifle.
They drag him to a tree,where they bind hem.He try to open his eyes 5 nazis wich execute the survivors!
After they execute all the survivors,they come near him.Cpt.Tomy,sneak a knife ,cut easy the ropes ,when the nazi tryies to obtain information from him, by force,cpt.Tomy throw the knife in the natzi Corporal and when the other soldiers prepare to shoot him,he close his eyes,and bang,bang when he open it all the soldiers are ded!!!!!
Than he saw his brother wich killed the nazi.He run to his brother ,he fold down, Cpt.Tomy call him:
-Brother are you OK??
-,,,,I,,,,,ne,,,,,nee,,need....a...meee...medic...Ah!
Cpt.Tomy lift him up and then ,he take the radio-station ,and try to contact the base:
-Eagle1,this is Bravo6 we need imidiatle vehicle,its an emergency,LTDiemar its very hurt!
-This is Bravo6, we copy that, a team is on the way!
The 2 brothers hear the jeep engine ,they hop in and the driver say:
-Damn it we have some Problems!!! End of part 1!!!

[iAqua?]

dafu* ??

[G0lD-StTaR]

man its a war stori!

[LeetNational]

1. learn to type
2. learn to make real stories
3. ???
4. profit!

[!Radi0activE^^]

totally bored me.Where are my cookies?

[Schiada77]

What the duck are nazis doing in Iraq? oO

[borgishmorg]

(28-04-2012 09:04 PM)Schiada77 schrieb:  What the duck are nazis doing in Iraq? oO

If you know your history, Nazis did go to Iraq for a short period of time, during WW2.......
Nevertheless, this guy is using them out of correct timeframe, and the story has WTF?!?!?! written all over it............

[APELINCOLN]

(28-04-2012 08:27 PM)G0lD-StTaR schrieb:  When cpt.Tomy is smoking his cigars a boom sounds disturb the quiet.When the driver turn on the jeep engine,Bang it exploded.Cpt.Tom is blast away by the power of the bang.
When he try to wake up, he is a little dissy, he hears some strange voices, he sees hes brother, lt Diemar.He crowels to himand he yale at him:
-BRother,Brotherr,brotherrrrr!!!!!
POW!Someone smack him in his head from behind with a rifle.
They drag him to a tree,where they bind hem.He try to open his eyes 5 nazis wich execute the survivors!

What... The... Fudge? O_O

[X4nothingx]

(28-04-2012 11:12 PM)APELINCOLN schrieb:  

(28-04-2012 08:27 PM)G0lD-StTaR schrieb:  When cpt.Tomy is smoking his cigars a boom sounds disturb the quiet.When the driver turn on the jeep engine,Bang it exploded.Cpt.Tom is blast away by the power of the bang.
When he try to wake up, he is a little dissy, he hears some strange voices, he sees hes brother, lt Diemar.He crowels to himand he yale at him:
-BRother,Brotherr,brotherrrrr!!!!!
POW!Someone smack him in his head from behind with a rifle.
They drag him to a tree,where they bind hem.He try to open his eyes 5 nazis wich execute the survivors!

What... The... Fudge? O_O

I agree

[Knifes...:D]

(29-04-2012 02:23 PM)X4nothingx schrieb:  

(28-04-2012 11:12 PM)APELINCOLN schrieb:  

(28-04-2012 08:27 PM)G0lD-StTaR schrieb:  When cpt.Tomy is smoking his cigars a boom sounds disturb the quiet.When the driver turn on the jeep engine,Bang it exploded.Cpt.Tom is blast away by the power of the bang.
When he try to wake up, he is a little dissy, he hears some strange voices, he sees hes brother, lt Diemar.He crowels to himand he yale at him:
-BRother,Brotherr,brotherrrrr!!!!!
POW!Someone smack him in his head from behind with a rifle.
They drag him to a tree,where they bind hem.He try to open his eyes 5 nazis wich execute the survivors!

What... The... Fudge? O_O

I agree

Valid opinion.

[T3553RACT]

This is gonna be the next best seller for sure.