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[Story] Recon 9 - [tK]-D!CE - 05-05-2010 07:09 AM

Hey guys, it's SKYLORD9 here. I was just wondering if someone could be in my story its about a guy called "Ace" he is a National commando sniper, and he is the best sniper the general [someone can play this role] has ever seen so he sent "Ace" to a special sqaud called "Recon 9" because he does missions solo and dominates the battlefield. SO PLEASE CONTACT ME IF YOU WANT A ROLE IN THIS STORY AND I NEED ABOUT 10 NATIONALS AND 10 ROYALS AT MAXIUM COMPASITY........[/color][/u]

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - hurter - 05-05-2010 07:26 AM

ok then I could be in stoy he could be our known and loved Goocharooni

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - [tK]-D!CE - 05-05-2010 07:36 AM

Hey, bro. I can't believe u found my story already!

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - [tK]-D!CE - 05-05-2010 07:40 AM

Ok, Gooch ur role is a new recruit like me I had to start allover because I had to train allover again in the story.

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - [tK]-D!CE - 05-05-2010 08:20 AM

Ok here is the first chapter:....

It is 23:43. Goocharooonie and Ace are on the infantry transport truck.
Goocharooonie: Are we there yet? I'm getting kinda tired. *YAWN*
Ace: Yea I hope so, I wanna see the training sights.

About an hour later, Ace and Goocharooonie leave the truck and go into the facility, Goocharoonie is half asleep, Ace is wide awake and is exicted to see the new training area,he first enter his room, but as he is packing Goocharoonie is already asleep on his bed.

The next morning.
*YAWN* Ace: Gooch, Gooch are you awake yet I wanna show you something.
Goocharooonie and Ace walk in the Armoury, Goocharoonie:Woooaaaahhh!!
Guide: What is your pick of weapons, Sir? Goocharooonie: Ummm, I reckon I should get that SMG there and that pistol over there, please. Guide: Coming right up, Sir. Goocharooonie: Hey what is your pick of weapons Ace?, Ace: I chose the Sniper rifle, and just a smiple knife.
The mysterious person know as "Guide" hands Gooch his weapons of choice.

Too be continued...... [P.S I need someone to play as a national general please]

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - ClickPlayNow - 05-05-2010 12:25 PM

You can use H1TL3R.JR he's my national soldier. I'll give matrix a link to this for the official library as well (:

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - [tK]-D!CE - 05-05-2010 09:58 PM

Sure, H1TL3R.JR. but what role do you want???

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - hurter - 05-05-2010 10:09 PM

(quote) Hey, bro. I can't believe u found my story already!

it was at the top of te story list p.s don't know how to properly quote

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - hurter - 05-05-2010 10:10 PM

and could you make the storys a little bit longer

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - ClickPlayNow - 06-05-2010 12:24 PM

(05-05-2010 09:58 PM)SKYLORD9 schrieb:  Sure, H1TL3R.JR. but what role do you want???

hmm, this is hard. can i be the evil badass supervillain whose goal it is to enslave the human race and destroy all humanity?

opps forgot, I'd also like him to die in some sort of epic dramatic way at the end

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - Zachary0015 - 06-05-2010 07:36 PM

Aw...Sigma's always the villain... Tongue One of these days I'll be cool in a story... XD


Also, my advice for the story. Try to make your chapters long and descriptive, and try to make a character talk like this.

"That would be fantastic", he said.

Instead of this:


Zachary0015: That would be fantastic.

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - hurter - 06-05-2010 09:47 PM

hey zachary why don't you and all the other ppl post at my story anymore cuz it's been three days

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - hurter - 06-05-2010 09:50 PM

and the storys are like this "hi" said the soldier instead of
soldier:hi.

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - ClickPlayNow - 07-05-2010 01:07 PM

(06-05-2010 07:36 PM)Zachary0015 schrieb:  Aw...Sigma's always the villain... Tongue One of these days I'll be cool in a story... XD


Also, my advice for the story. Try to make your chapters long and descriptive, and try to make a character talk like this.

"That would be fantastic", he said.

Instead of this:


Zachary0015: That would be fantastic.

yes, i am always the villain because i am a villainous badass. Anyway, do try to make them a bit longer and improve on dialogue, then this story will kick ass, but not badass, because then it would be kicking me. and that's not good

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - hurter - 07-05-2010 10:52 PM

why does no one post story!!!jeez what do you ppl have against me!!!!!!! it has been a week since anyone(besides me)has posted at my story all hands on guns.

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - Zachary0015 - 07-05-2010 11:16 PM

Well...We usually don't post on topics for no reason. We usually post on stories to review them, and there's been no activity as of yet there.

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - ClickPlayNow - 08-05-2010 09:19 PM

you tell him, zach!

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - Zachary0015 - 08-05-2010 09:51 PM

lolz.

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - hurter - 08-05-2010 09:57 PM

lol now i see why you are the bad guy

RE: [Story] Recon 9 - [tK]-D!CE - 08-05-2010 10:00 PM

Sure, ClickPLayNow I can do that for you.